英検2級の要約問題です。 採点お願いします！！ 元の文 When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. These days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates. What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science any can give advice about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skills. In the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house. As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves. 私の回答 Some students choose to share a house wide roommates. Choosing to share a house has benefit, such as they can help their homework each other and they can learn a foreign languages everyday with roommate. On the other hand, disadvantage is that may roommate is noisy and they can’t enough to sleep. chatGPTにも聞いてみたのですが次のような回答が来ました。これは信じてもいいんでしょうか。 採点結果（20点満点中の目安） ① 内容（6/8） • ◎ 「ルームシェアを選ぶ学生がいる」「勉強や外国語学習に役立つ」などポジティブな要点は入っている。 • △「掃除を手伝わない」点や「掃除に時間がかかる」などネガティブ要点の一部が抜けている。 → 内容は6/8点くらい。 ② 語彙・表現（2.5/4） • ◎「help each other」「learn a foreign language」など、伝わる表現が使えている。 • △ “wide roommates” → “with roommates”、“a foreign languages” → “a foreign language” などミスあり。 • △ “benefit” → “benefits”、“disadvantage is that may roommate” → “a disadvantage is that a roommate may…” の方が自然。 → 2.5/4点 ③ 文法（2/4） • ✕ “they can’t enough to sleep” → “they can’t get enough sleep” • ✕ “may roommate” → “my roommate” or “a roommate may” • ✕ “can help their homework each other” → “can help each other with their homework” → 意味は伝わるけど、文法ミスがいくつかあるので 2/4点。 ④ 構成（3/4） • ◎ 「利点→欠点」という流れはしっかりしている。 • △ 文と文のつながりがやや不自然で、接続表現（e.g. “However,” “On the other hand,”）をもう少し工夫できる。 → 3/4点 総合評価：13.5 / 20点（約68％）
