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英検2級の要約の添削お願いします また何点くらい取れてると思いますか? 本文 AS technology improves, ways to communicate have become more diverse. Nowadays, social media plays a significant role in our daily lives. Especially among young people, has become a popular way to communicate with others. Why do so many young people like it? One reason is that social media helps them feel connected to other people. They can chat with friends anytime, and share messages, pictures, or videos. Social media also helps them learn new things. They can find new ideas from people outside their local community. However, there are some problems. It can affect mental health. Some young people start to feel like they are not good enough when they compare themselves to others on social media. Moreover, if young people share too much personal information online or talk to strangers, they might end up in dangerous situations. They have be aware of these risks when using social media. 要約 Social media has turned into a popular way to communicate with others. There are some reasons, such as talking with people any time and learning new things. However, it has problems. For example,social media may affect mental health and people can end up in dangerous situations.

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文法的には間違いはありませんが、この article の主たる主張は、最後の段落にあるので、それを強調すべきでしょう。下は、余り成績のよくない学生さんの要約例です。 Social media plays a big role of young people’s lives, helping them connect, share, and learn. It can, however, negatively affect mental health through comparison and can pose risks if personal information is overshared or if contact is made with strangers. While taking advantage of its benefits, users should remain conscious of these risks.

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