添削＆採点をお願いします。 次の英文は、ある大学の経営学の講座でリー(Lee)教授が日本の雇用形態について講義をしているところである。その内容を読んで、あとの問いに答えよ。 Professor Lee: The other day, I read this article online. The employment system in Japan is occasionally called "lifetime employment," or shushin koyousei in Japanese. I believe you are familiar with this system. However, in the past few years, many businesses have been steadily changing towards "job-focused employment." This approach emphasizes evaluating workers according to their skills and replacing not-so-good employees with highly skilled ones. あなたはリー教授の意見に反対するレポートを書くことになった。空所(Ｘ)，(Ｙ)を合計30～ 40 語程度の英語で補え。その際、下の＜語群＞を参考にしてもかまわない。 ＜語群＞ evaluate，protect，economy，drop，teamwork，harmony Professor Lee advises that (Ｘ), but I'm against her advice because (Ｙ). 以下のように解答したのですが、10点満点で何点ぐらいになるでしょうか？ Professor Lee advises that (evaluating workers according to their skills is important and Japananes companies should change towards "job-focused employment"), but I'm against her advice because ("lifetime employment" protects workers and the Japanese people think teamwork and harmony are more important).
