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Bubblegumpink Kiss (Grownup Version)

There is a young girl named Ella, and she loves bubbles and color pink especially bubble gum pink. Bubble gum was her favorite, and she couldn't resist blowing bubbles every chance she got. Each time she blew a bubble, it was like setting a wish free, carried by the wind to a place she could only imagine. The villagers always watch so to perform the style and design and this made her known as the Bubble Gum Artist. Her fame leapt from village to village, always in demand at every festival and celebration, the air shimmered with the energy of countless dreams, each bubble she blew carrying a piece of her heart to the crowd.

One day she discovers that she can blow bubbles kisses into the blowing gum and when Ella’s bubble kissed the air and popped too soon, it wasn’t a failure, it was simply a gust of wind telling her to try again. Her friends and family became her motivation, motivating her that she could do it, down to that she practiced night s and days. Just like her bubbles grew larger and bolder, so did Ella’s confidence, stretching wider with each attempt. One fateful evening when she was performing in of the festivals she was invited to, she performed as usual but when performing she blows the bubble gum and successful blows the kisses in to the bubble gum. This became very known, and it not only brought fame to Ella herself but to the whole village and she became a beacon of inspiration to others and Ella realized it’s not about just blowing bubbles but about sharing happiness and creativity with others.
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Michael E Cantrall - I enjoyed spotting the use of various literary tropes in this one. For instance, you employed a simile in this phrase, "Each time she blew a bubble, _it was like_ setting a wish free."  That's quite a unique phrase you've penned there. Your use of personification is present as well. For instance,  in this phrase, "the air shimmered with the energy of countless dreams...," and in this one, "a gust of wind telling her to try again." You have a very active imagination!  I loved this, too.... "...blows the kisses into the bubble gum."  It was a delightful read, and for writers who enjoy spotting the underlying structure of a written work, it was also informative on the technical side.  

Nicely penned
on Feb 05 2025 10:03 AM PST   
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Titi Lope - Thank you for the analysis really means a lot to me
on Feb 05 2025 10:06 AM PST   
Dark Seuss - Always enjoy feel good work. This is wonderful it kept my interest and a smile while reading.

Good work
on Feb 05 2025 06:21 AM PST   
Titi Lope - thank you , glad it met your interest
on Feb 05 2025 06:34 AM PST   
RamachandranRajasekhar - This prose poem is a fascinating composition. The storyline is captivating, endearing and enjoyable. I enjoyed this light hearted poem.
Liked: Titi Lope • on Feb 05 2025 04:51 AM PST    Titi Lope
Titi Lope - Glad you enjoyed it, thank you
on Feb 05 2025 04:59 AM PST   
RamachandranRajasekhar - Always welcome  , friend
on Feb 05 2025 05:33 AM PST   
Nunoftferreira - Sweet and charming story. Ella's passion for bubbles and her journey to mastering the bubble kiss are heartwarming.Very clever and creative narrative
on Feb 05 2025 02:33 AM PST   
Titi Lope - thank you
on Feb 05 2025 02:47 AM PST   
Mrs Campbell - Great story telling skills.

for taking part in the exchange.

Blessings always
on Feb 05 2025 02:12 AM PST   
Titi Lope - thank you Mrs Campbell
Liked: Mrs Campbell • on Feb 05 2025 02:15 AM PST    Mrs Campbell
Obinnex - The story is about a young girl who finds that she loves to blow bubbles and gets really good at it. She has to work hard to learn how to blow them well, but she doesn't give up. When she finally succeeds, she uses her talent to make other people happy. This story teaches us that it's important to share our special skills with the world.
on Feb 05 2025 01:56 AM PST   
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Titi Lope - yeah that's you perfectly captured it, thank you
on Feb 05 2025 02:07 AM PST   
Obinnex - You are welcome! 🙂🙏
Liked: Titi Lope • on Feb 05 2025 03:25 AM PST    Titi Lope
Kevin's helper - Good write! This poem has a whimsical and playful tone, with a relatable and endearing protagonist, Ella. The use of sensory details, such as the "bubble gum pink" and the "shimmered air" effectively evoke a sense of wonder and magic. The poem also explores themes of creativity, perseverance, and self-confidence in a way that's both inspiring and accessible. The language is simple yet evocative, making it easy to follow and enjoyable to read.

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on Dec 26 2024 09:30 AM PST   
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