Michael E Cantrall - I enjoyed spotting the use of various literary tropes in this one. For instance, you employed a simile in this phrase, "Each time she blew a bubble, _it was like_ setting a wish free." That's quite a unique phrase you've penned there. Your use of personification is present as well. For instance, in this phrase, "the air shimmered with the energy of countless dreams...," and in this one, "a gust of wind telling her to try again." You have a very active imagination! I loved this, too.... "...blows the kisses into the bubble gum." It was a delightful read, and for writers who enjoy spotting the underlying structure of a written work, it was also informative on the technical side.
RamachandranRajasekhar - This prose poem is a fascinating composition. The storyline is captivating, endearing and enjoyable. I enjoyed this light hearted poem.
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Nunoftferreira - Sweet and charming story. Ella's passion for bubbles and her journey to mastering the bubble kiss are heartwarming.Very clever and creative narrative
Obinnex - The story is about a young girl who finds that she loves to blow bubbles and gets really good at it. She has to work hard to learn how to blow them well, but she doesn't give up. When she finally succeeds, she uses her talent to make other people happy. This story teaches us that it's important to share our special skills with the world.
Kevin's helper - Good write! This poem has a whimsical and playful tone, with a relatable and endearing protagonist, Ella. The use of sensory details, such as the "bubble gum pink" and the "shimmered air" effectively evoke a sense of wonder and magic. The poem also explores themes of creativity, perseverance, and self-confidence in a way that's both inspiring and accessible. The language is simple yet evocative, making it easy to follow and enjoyable to read.
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Nicely penned
Good work
Blessings always