2025年第2回英検準一級についてです。 ライティングのShould people who live in cities be required to use public transportation?(都市部に住む人々は公共交通機関を使うことを義務付けられるべきか)というお題に対して、公共交通機関のバスとか電車を使った方がcarbon emissions増えるから良くないよねみたいな感じで書いちゃったんですけどどれくらいの点数だと思いますか？？？？？ ちなみに書いた内容は Some people argue that people who live in cities should be required to use public transportation. In my opinion, however, citizens who live in urban areas should not be required to use public transportation. When it comes to pollution and safety. First, if many people use public transportation such as train or bus, carbon emissions would increase more and more. It has a negative impacts on the global issues like pollution and climate change. It is not good for the environment. Second, increasing the use of public transportation such as bus would lead traffic jams and accidents. It has a negative impact on people’s happy and safety life. In conclusion, considering reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that people who live in cities should not be required to use public transportation. です。 普通に考えたら車の方が排出するからこの観点はダメですかね、、 どなたでもいいので教えて頂けたら嬉しいです(；；)
