英検のライティングが微妙すぎて合格してるか不安なので英検準2級の採点者目線でライティングの文法・構成をチェックしてもらえますか?お願いします。 1個目の方のEメールの方が都市にするのは田舎よりいいかという問題です。 I think that 〜(質問文の一部を抜き出してここにいれた。) because the city have some beautiful views . For example, if you walking at night, you will looked beautiful night view. Have you ever seen beautiful night view in the city? Is there a lot of stores ? 2個目の問いは子供に漫画を読ませることはいいことが悪いことかというかんじです。 I think that it is good for children to read comic books. I have two reasons. First, children can find their dreams. For example, when they read comic books ,they want to become some characters. Second, they can get reading skill. For example, when they find difficult words, they open dictionary to read comic books . So I think that.