Descriptive Writing IGCSE

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After six days shipwrecked and living at

the mercy of the tumultuous sea alone in


a tiny raft, the hard weedy sand under
my feet was as welcome as a Starbucks
café. I never thought I would do it, but as
soon as I had crawled out of the water, I
dropped to my knees and kissed the white
salty beach below me.

Tiny black crabs scuttled for shelter under


the sun-bleached rocks that encircled the
small cove I had landed in. From the
position of my shadow and the glaring sun
overhead, I judged it to be mid day,
though the days on the raft had started to
stretch into an unimaginable epoch.
Exhausted and relieved, with the sound of
the gentle sea behind me and the breezes
gusting through the palm trees in front
lulling me, I merely sat on my knees and
took it all in.

Up above the small beach I sat upon was a


dark rocky horseshoe-shaped outcropping;
it would provide a good shelter. Beyond
that, a dense forest of palms and other
fruit trees swayed lackadaisically in the
island breezes. The bright yellow dates
hanging in great bunches beckoned me,
making my mouth water with the thought
of their flavour - heavy, robust, sweet
dates, hanging there like beacons.

Just then the tranquility was shattered by


a whizzing that shot past my ear. Was it
an insect? Another whiz and a stinging
sharp pain in my thigh - instinctually I
smacked at it, but it was no wasp. My
hand knocked a home-made dart out of
my leg, which was followed by a rivulet of
blood.

Shooting my eyes around among the trees


and rocks, I could not see my assailants,
but no more darts came. I did, however,
hear voices speaking in a strange language
made up of sounds I did not recognise. The
gurgles and booms they spoke sounded like
many wounded soldiers crying out in a
WWII hospital dorm.

My vision was becoming blurred and my


ears muffled, but at last they approached
me, the people of this island. A small gang
of perhaps ten men, dark skinned like
myself, but less hairy; tall, lanky, with
long legs and arms that swung down like
tree branches, their bodies bare except for
animal-skin loin cloths and painted red
ochre and white ash geometric designs on
their chests and faces, and vicious pointed
bones jabbed through their ear lobes and
noses.

As the apparent leader, with a mass of


black feathers woven into his shock of
ruddy hair, poked at me with a pointed
stick, I passed out.

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