英語に詳しい方、Writngの添削をお願いします。 内容 構成 語彙 文法 それぞれ4点、計16点で 点数もつけていただくとありがたいです。 Is the quality of school education in Japan high enough? I think that the quality of school education in Japan is high enough. I have two reasons to support my opinion in terms of academic standards and global skills. The first reason is that boosting academic standards benefits students in the long run. For example, in many cases, if they improve studying ability, they are likely to do the realization of the Japanese economy. This means that they contribute to society, which will make a thing better their quality of life. The second reason is that refining their global skills enables they to communicate people from in other countries easily. For instance, they can have a great opportunity to talk with foreign people through many occasions. By promoting global skills, however, there is some possibility of going into foreign companies in the future. For these reasons, I believe that it is desirable for students to elevate the quality of school education.
