Psychovert - ← This poem is truly amazing in potraying the emotions in which we present the false facade of us to others hiding out vulnerable side. I love it.
R. K. Potter - The meaning is so deep. The word are so accurate and precisely choosen.. It's really a great poem I liked it very much. I will be taking lots of inspiration from this poem to enlighten my writing skills. Thanks
Anirban Dutta Banik - "As words danced on the canvas of your soul, 'Whispers of the Heart' was born, a symphony of love, a brushstroke of divine beauty."
Naira128 - Whore is a profession. And women in that profession are called whores. It's a profession that lifted many families out of poverty. He's not calling all women whores.
MidnightCloudWatcher - I do weep at this. Openly because it cannot be hidden at times and in secret alone. Or I did. At some point you run out of the tears but the feelings remain there.
Helen Harry Henry - I can't help but think of my dad while reading this. I was raised by a single father. He was tough. Real tough. Like you. But I feel like he was also misunderstood. I was the one who got to see his true identity, when he freed the blue bird down in the basement, while he thought I lay in my room asleep. I would listen to him talk out loud. He would get out his hurts and pains and tears while he smoked his cigars and drank his beer. I got to see what truly hid inside, and tho it was sad, it was beautiful, becuase I knew my father wasnt the moster he wanted everyone else to believe he was. He was like you, afraid to open the cage in public, so he kept it trapped most days, except on the days he thought I was asleep. Im glad the insomnia that developed at such a young age was one of the reasons he was able to truly be seen by me. It's easy to keep baby blue in a cage but what's truly deserving of credit is the courage that it takes to open the gate.
-AT
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Symphony8 - I remember this poem from a high school project that I had done. I am always intrigued by this piece because for me, the blue bird where the heart is, a metaphor, and it is really easy to have a sick minded heart. I used to read this with friends in the field smoking and talk about it for hours. Thank you for putting this here.
ElspethMcLugnut - Unpopular opinion here: I’ve read most of Bukowski’s work and have laughed heartily at his sometimes profound and funny insights. I don’t think this is his best work. I see it more as an excuse in poem form—the equivalent of shrugging “boys will be boys!” It’s a bit of a boomer for me… a self-indulgent take on masculinity. Happy it speaks to others though!
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Tobunculus - Bukowski, in my opinion, was neither the best poet nor the most valiant one, yet the vulnerability displayed in-between the bouts of self-indulgence is interesting, considering the life he led. You mentioned boomers, and the comparison rings true! And yet, I think there are few boomer men alive today that would ever publicly express softness in the way this poem does.
Putting aside my advocacy, I think there is some falsity in this poem's vulnerability. I also think it's rather blunt and he doesn't make much of a point. The bluebird metaphor is a one-trick pony that doesn't do a particularly impressive trick anyway. While discussing the poem with my girlfriend she pointed out that, while we agree that the poem is bad, the last stanza was a little better than the rest.
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Elspeth McGethin - Just seeing your reply and agree: you’ve pinpointed why I can’t abide this one. It hinges on a sour note of falsity, yeah, and maybe the most egregious kind of falsity—one posing as profound truth. The vulnerable and magical little bluebird we glimpse in his work from time to time between bouts of bombast deserved better.
Khay4 - Hard felt poem. Really shows the real you trying to break out but you won't let anyone see to keep them viewing you as the strongest stone no one can break
Jank - The poem explores the concept of emotional repression and the struggle to maintain a tough exterior. The speaker, seemingly a man, describes a metaphorical bluebird trapped within his heart. This bluebird represents his gentler, more vulnerable self. The overall tone is melancholic, tinged with a sense of loneliness and longing.
Skintech53 - Is wack! But after you shed light upon my tiny brain, it grew a little. Yep! There is DEFINITELY a few more wrinkles on it! And now I can appreciate this piece! Thanks for that!
- From guest Alexia Donnelly (contact)
wow my teacher ms.kern introduced the class to peotry, and when the class read this poem i could see a man with a bluebird right next to him at night and i also imagined him opening and hole in his chest and pertching it on a bar in the morning. it jus ttold me that he realy needed someone to talk to about his feelings. my teacher told us that he was a verry cranky man. then once i read the line "you want to blow my book sales in/Europe?" i figured out that the only resson he was cranky was because he wanted people to by his books to figure out why he is so cranky, but they never figure it out. this is just an amazing poem!!!
- From guest laura (contact)
it makes me cry everytime i read it because i, too, have a bluebird in my heart. sometimes i read the poem just so i CAN cry. it's so real, so open, i love hank!!
Griswold - Bukowski just plain rocks. He has to be one of my favorites just because he is so right in your face about his writing. I do that too, what good are pretty words covering up a crazy world? You can pretty anything up with gold leaf but it's still shit under it.
- From guest Alan G (contact)
How I love this one, the writing alone is great and very colorful, but the reading by Bukowski was much more then great. google for it, the piece comes alive while he's reading it.
- From guest Chris Bittar (contact)
Bukowski The Great . His stories,his essays,his rhetoric and his ramblings. They all have a coherent truth. Only a few truly know the struggle to keep the bluebird inside. This particular work has always hit home.
" If there is a heaven and god I hope there is. He's up there right now drunk as a fuckin' monkey and smokin' shit"
- From guest sandra johnson (contact)
if i remembered how to cry i think i might have a little because this poem made the back of my eyelids feel hot. especially when he tells the bluebird not to be sad because he knows he's in there.
Inspired.
Amazing
Lovely!
Amazing
Keep up the beautiful work
-AT
Lovely share
Inspight of restless fright.
Amazing
Putting aside my advocacy, I think there is some falsity in this poem's vulnerability. I also think it's rather blunt and he doesn't make much of a point. The bluebird metaphor is a one-trick pony that doesn't do a particularly impressive trick anyway. While discussing the poem with my girlfriend she pointed out that, while we agree that the poem is bad, the last stanza was a little better than the rest.
Great
Good job
(original) um....inspirational...
Inspired!
Enjoyed it