Nam - I feel, though the rhyming is good, that this piece probably would have worked best if it didn't rhyme. But as stated it's good the way it is written as is.
It's a quaint depiction of a motion. It carries in that motion and doesn't shy away from it.
It's a quaint depiction of a motion. It carries in that motion and doesn't shy away from it.
a good piece written by Sassoon.