Razz - Somehow the piece in question for long has bother the subconscious in the perfect synergy that even are the garden hedge rows but only in time to refer of the Queens Beauty .
Timeteller - Cut grass and death, white hours of June, white flowers for funerals. A clever metaphor, white lilac, white lace, and white summer clouds. The funeral and remembrance of cut grass, that lingering smell of sweet death. A master of poetry.
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Oo,i kno tha question bou the line lenghts!!They short,like life is short & then the death ones signify death....i fink!?Same wi the poem,the poems short jus like life is!
Long, long the death it dies
in the white hours of young-leafed June
with chestnut flowers,
with hedges snowlike strewn, white lilac bowed,
lost lanes of Queen Anne's lace,
and that high-builded cloud moving at summer's pace.
because I wanted to see what it would read like if taken out of the rhyming quatrain form. What's delightful about poetry like this is that you have to read it twice, at least, once to ride the rhymes and once to catch the meaning. Larking achieves his effect with masterful use of enjambement.
I don't know why he moves from 4 syllable lines to 6 syllable lines; maybe someone else out there will figure that out. I would think that a poet of his skill did this as a conscious choice, not by accident.
Enjoyed it.