英検準1級の意見論述の採点をお願いします! [問題] TOPIC: Should people who live in cities be required to use public transportation? POINTS: Convenience,Costs,Pollution,Safety (与えられたPOINTSのうち2つを使って大体120-150語の長さで書く) [自分の解答] People who live in cities should be required to use public transportation, particularly in relation to pollution and safety. Firstly, using public transportation can reduce emission of CO2. Nowadays, many cars release CO2, but a transportation such as a train releases less CO2. It is essential for the environment to decline CO2 emission. Secondly, people can safely move with trains that are one kind of public transportation. Many people died because of sudden traffic accidents. Declining these problems is too important to ignore for contemporary people. For these reasons, using public transportation should be a priority for people who live in cities.