英語に詳しい方、Writngの添削をお願いします。 内容 構成 語彙 文法 それぞれ4点、計16点で 点数もつけていただくとありがたいです。 Will humans live on other planets someday? I think that humans will live on other planets someday. I have two reasons to support my opinion in terms of situation on earth and technology's skill. The first reason is that living on other planets enables people to more grasp their situation on earth. For example, they can have a great opportunity to learn the importance of the state of the earth. Without understanding situation on earth, they will not be able to have an opportunity. The second reason is that developing technology benefits people in the long run. For instance, in many cases, if they move to other planet, they are likely to improve their potential ability. This means that they can refine technology's skill, which is beneficial to the economy in the future. For these reasons, I believe that this trend seems likely to grow coming years.
