Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-iana-update-02
review-ietf-pce-iana-update-02-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2024-10-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-iana-update |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2024-11-01 | |
Requested | 2024-10-18 | |
Authors | Dhruv Dhody , Adrian Farrel | |
I-D last updated | 2024-10-23 | |
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Secdir Last Call review of -02
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Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Carlos Pignataro (diff) Artart Last Call review of -02 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Genart Last Call review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Carlos Pignataro |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-pce-iana-update by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/wajAIZ6uF3HZU9EIzQYsaYBTj0o | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 03) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2024-10-23 |
review-ietf-pce-iana-update-02-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2024-10-23-00
Hi, Please find below the Ops Directorate (opsdir) review for draft-ietf-pce-iana-update-02. Review of draft-ietf-pce-iana-update-02 Type Last Call Review Team Ops Directorate (opsdir) Reviewer Carlos Pignataro Summary: This is a useful and easy-to-understand document. Its simplicity does not take away from its value. This broad cleanup of registrations would prevent future mistakes. It mostly 'downgrades' registration policies from Std Action to IETF review, which makes it easier to have numbers assigned. It also adds an Experimental range, which is also useful and welcome! More Substantive: None. Minor: Appendix B. Rationale for updating all registries with Standards Action CMP: Should this be part of the document or deleted and kept in the list archives? Not sure of the value as an appendix. CMP: Further, the "Future registries" paragraph ought to be moved up on the document, and outside the Appendix, in my opinion. More Editorial: 1. Introduction The IANA "Path Computation Element Protocol (PCEP) Numbers" registry group was populated by several RFCs produced by the Path Computation Element (PCE) working group. Most of the registries include the "IETF Review" [RFC8126] as registration procedures. There are a few registries that use "Standards Action". Thus the values in those CMP: "Thus, " 3.2. Handling of Unknown Experimentation A PCEP implementation that receives an experimental Error-Type in a PCEP message and does not recognize the Error-Type (i.e., is not part of the experiment) will treat the error as it would treat any other unknown Error-Type (such as from a new protocol extension). An implementation that is notified of a PCEP error will normally close the PCEP session (see [RFC5440]). In general, PCEP implementations are not required to take specific action based on Error-Types, but may log the errors for diagnostic purposes. CMP: "... on Error-Types but may log..." As with unknown Error-Types, an implementation receiving an unknown Error-value is not expected to do more than log the received error, and may close the PCEP session. CMP: "...received error and may close..."" Appendix C. Consideration of RFC 8356 It is worth noting that [RFC8356] deliberately chose to make experimental codepoints available only in the PCEP messages, objects, and TLV types registries. Appendix A of that document gives a brief CMP: "... and TLV type registries." Thanks! Carlos.