Little Exercise

For Thomas Edwards Wanning
               
               
Think of the storm roaming the sky uneasily
like a dog looking for a place to sleep in,
listen to it growling.

Think how they must look now, the mangrove keys
lying out there unresponsive to the lightning
in dark, coarse-fibred families,

where occasionally a heron may undo his head,
shake up his feathers, make an uncertain comment
when the surrounding water shines.

Think of the boulevard and the little palm trees
all stuck in rows, suddenly revealed
as fistfuls of limp fish-skeletons.

It is raining there. The boulevard
and its broken sidewalks with weeds in every crack,
are relieved to be wet, the sea to be freshened.

Now the storm goes away again in a series
of small, badly lit battle-scenes,
each in "Another part of the field."

Think of someone sleeping in the bottom of a row-boat
tied to a mangrove root or the pile of a bridge;
think of him as uninjured, barely disturbed.
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Analysis (ai): "Little Exercise" by Elizabeth Bishop presents a detached and almost matter-of-fact account of a storm. The poem's tone is one of calm observation, even as the storm rages around the speaker. This detachment is evident in the poem's opening lines, which personify the storm as "a dog looking for a place to sleep in."

The poem's imagery is precise and evocative, creating a vivid picture of the storm and its effects. Bishop uses the image of "mangrove keys" to suggest the desolation of the landscape, while the "heron" that "undoes his head" is a solitary figure amidst the chaos. The "boulevard" and "little palm trees" are also depicted as victims of the storm, their appearance transformed into "fistfuls of limp fish-skeletons."

The poem's structure is episodic, with each stanza describing a different aspect of the storm. This structure creates a sense of fragmentation and disorientation, reflecting the speaker's own sense of alienation from the natural world. The poem ends with the speaker's thoughts turning to someone "sleeping in the bottom of a row-boat," a figure who is somehow able to remain undisturbed by the storm. This image suggests a sense of hope or resilience, even in the face of adversity.

Compared to Bishop's other works, "Little Exercise" is more restrained and less overtly emotional. The speaker's tone is more detached and observational, and there is less of the personal lyricism that characterizes many of Bishop's other poems. However, the poem is still a powerful and moving evocation of the natural world, and it captures the sense of wonder and awe that Bishop often felt in the face of nature. (hide)
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Jawahar Gupta - It is raining there. The boulevard
and its broken sidewalks with weeds in every crack,
are relieved to be wet, the sea to be freshened.
on Dec 02 2017 08:44 AM PST   x  edit  
Jawahar Gupta - wonderful simile

Think of the storm roaming the sky uneasily
like a dog looking for a place to sleep in,
listen to it growling.
on Dec 27 2017 01:42 AM PST   x  edit  

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