Five Flights Up

Still dark.
The unknown bird sits on his usual branch.
The little dog next door barks in his sleep
inquiringly, just once.
Perhaps in his sleep, too, the bird inquires
once or twice, quavering.
Questions—-if that is what they are—-
answered directly, simply,
by day itself.

Enormous morning, ponderous, meticulous;
gray light streaking each bare branch,
each single twig, along one side,
making another tree, of glassy veins…
The bird still sits there. Now he seems to yawn.

The little black dog runs in his yard.
His owner's voice arises, stern,
"You ought to be ashamed!"
What has he done?
He bounces cheerfully up and down;
he rushes in circles in the fallen leaves.

Obviously, he has no sense of shame.
He and the bird know everything is answered,
all taken care of,
no need to ask again.
—-Yesterday brought to today so lightly!
(A yesterday I find almost impossible to lift.)
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Analysis (ai): This ladder is a continuation of the authors' other works in that it:
- Explores the beauty and transience of the natural world.
- Uses simple, precise language to create vivid images.
- Provokes a sense of wonder and introspection in the reader.
- Demonstrates the author's skill at observing and conveying the natural world.
-  The "you" in the second to last sentence is the implied subject of the next sentence, and the bird and dog are the implied objects of the next sentence.
-  The ladder is a continuation of the author's other works in that it:
- Exploes the beauty and transience of the natural world.
- Uses simple, precise language to create vivid images.
- Provokes a sense of wonder and introspection in the reader.
- Demonstrates the author's skill at observing and conveying the natural world (hide)
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The knockers - Reminds me of my divorce!
on May 04 2024 01:19 PM PST   x  edit  
John Rhinem - ← `Smile, tis very beautiful! Made me think of, `Christ Jesus:` My, peace I give unto you; not as the world ~ Definitely, 'Impossible to lift....`Sweet Kisses |\(*{{....~
on Oct 27 2014 02:20 PM PST   x  edit  
The knockers - I remember a guy called jesus he was super duper smexy
on May 04 2024 01:19 PM PST   x  edit  
John Rhinem -

~....}}*)|\ `You, Sweet Baby *

on Nov 06 2014 05:27 PM PST   x  edit  
Kenny Wilson - I can't get this one. What is it about? There is no shape or rhythm to it at all. Not great in my opinion.
on Oct 26 2022 04:53 AM PST   x  edit  
- kudos

Liked it
on May 01 2019 12:27 PM PST   x  edit  
QueenOfDarkenDreams. - fabulous

Nicely written.
on Mar 26 2019 11:49 AM PST   x  edit  
QueenOfDarkenDreams. - kudos

Thx
on May 01 2019 12:23 PM PST   x  edit  
Pseu-do-nym - This is incredible
on Feb 14 2019 08:23 PM PST   x  edit  
Terry Collett - Great poem
on Jun 05 2018 12:22 PM PST   x  edit  
Jawahar Gupta - His breast was deep and white,
cold and caressable;
his eyes were red glass,
on Dec 02 2017 08:47 AM PST   x  edit  
The knockers - I edge to you!
on May 04 2024 01:17 PM PST   x  edit  
Jawahar Gupta - nicely corrected here
His owner's voice arises, stern,
"You ought to be ashamed!"
What has he done?
on Dec 27 2017 01:49 AM PST   x  edit  

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Cafegroundzero -
Robert Lowell was oh so lucky to have made her friendship.

Her blending of image and interpretation are unique.
on Jan 24 2009 08:05 AM PST   x  edit  
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