IGCSE Year 9 Descriptive Writing Lesson Notes
Lesson Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students should be able to:
1. Understand what descriptive writing is and why it's not just listing adjectives.
2. Learn how to create vivid, sensory images through words.
3. Use similes, metaphors, and personification naturally.
4. Develop an atmosphere that makes the reader feel something (even if it's discomfort from the smell of
imaginary socks).
What is Descriptive Writing?
Descriptive writing paints a picture with words. It uses sensory details to:
- Create atmosphere
- Bring scenes and characters to life
- Evoke emotion
Think of it as writing with a camera, microphone, and nose (yes, nose). If the reader can see, hear, feel, or
smell it-they're immersed!
Sensory Details
Always ask: What would you...
- See?
- Hear?
- Smell?
- Feel (touch)?
- Taste?
The more specific, the better:
- Weak: "The room was messy."
- Strong: "Dirty socks clung to the lamp like bats in a cave, and the air smelled like expired cheese."
IGCSE Year 9 Descriptive Writing Lesson Notes
Techniques that Work
1. Show, Don't Tell: Don't say "She was scared." Show it!
- "Her fingers trembled around the doorknob."
2. Figurative Language:
- Simile: "The wind hissed like a boiling kettle."
- Metaphor: "The classroom was a zoo."
- Personification: "The moon watched silently."
3. Vary Sentence Structure:
- Mix long, flowing sentences with short, punchy ones for effect.
Descriptive Writing Prompts
1. Describe a thunderstorm from the perspective of a nervous cat.
2. Write about a forgotten place at the edge of a forest.
3. Describe the inside of an old suitcase filled with secrets.
4. Imagine walking through a city where everything is made of sweets.
Mini Sample
The sun melted into the horizon, bleeding orange and gold across the sky. A warm breeze carried the scent
of grilled corn and dust, while a solitary swing creaked on its rusty hinge like a whisper from the past.
Quick Checklist
- Did I use at least 3 senses?
- Did I show, not tell?
- Did I use figurative language?
- Did I avoid clichés?
- Did I create a clear atmosphere or mood?
IGCSE Year 9 Descriptive Writing Lesson Notes
Wrap-Up
Descriptive writing isn't just about describing-it's about transporting. The best pieces don't just tell a reader
what a place looks like-they make them feel like they've been there.
"Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader-not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of
being rained upon." - E.L. Doctorow