Estandarte Charmaine Rose T. Writing Prof Kor - City
Estandarte Charmaine Rose T. Writing Prof Kor - City
Research Title
II. Abstract
This study determined the writing proficiency level of 177 Grade 11 Humanities
School-Senior High School department, Koronadal City. Four out of eight sections in
research was utilized in this study. The said respondents were given 45-item
assessment test, which measures their writing proficiency level in three aspects—
grammar, mechanics of writing, and organization. Furthermore, the results of the study
revealed that Grade 11 HUMSS students had high proficiency level in both grammar
and mechanics of writing, whereas in organization they had only moderate proficiency
level. Since organization was the least developed writing skill of the students, a
on the evaluation done, the module attained very good content, technical as well as
instructional qualities. Moreover, it was recommended that this module must be used
in teaching Reading and Writing as well as English for Academic and Professional
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III. Acknowledgment
This study would not have been possible without the guidance and support of
various individuals who in one way or another contributed and extended their valuable
knowledge as well as wisdom accompanied with great love and care in order for her
Dr. Arturo B. Bayocot, CESO V, Dr. Allan G. Farnazo, and the Regional
Research Committee for approving the research proposal and giving her the
High School (KNCHS), for their invaluable support bestowed to her from the beginning
Jennifer, Viannie, Dave, Ida, Mary Ann, Jean, her friends, for their unending
To everyone who has been part of this meaningful research journey, her
heartfelt gratefulness.
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IV. Context and Rationale
Writing is said to be one of the macro skills needed for the total language
the most complex and difficult skill to master, for writing lies not only in
generating and organizing of ideas, but also in translating these ideas into
strong writing skills for high school students does not only help improve their
grades, but also prepares them for their academic and professional futures .
secondary level, the so-called Senior High School years which are composed of
Grade 11 and Grade 12. In the Senior High School (SHS) Curriculum, there are
(STEM) strands; the Technical Vocational Livelihood (TVL) Track which is made
up of Home Economics, Agri-Fishery, Industrial Arts and ICT strands; the Sports
Track; and Arts and Design Track (Velasco, 2012). There are eight learning
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areas in the SHS core curriculum that are needed to be taught well in all tracks,
and one of these is Language wherein one of its subject is Reading and Writing.
standards set for the learners in those fields show that there is a need to help
learners improve and develop their writing skills. In addition, these mentioned
skills are significant for the learners to have life skills as well as to help them
prepare for the world of work, entrepreneurship, or higher education. When they
apply for work, they need an application letter, and when they are already
writing skills are essential. Those are not just simple recall concepts, bu t those
In fact, Salazar (2007) revealed that based on March 2006 SWS survey on
over the last twelve years if compared to SWS surveys in December 1993 and
from ability to speak and write as well as to think in English. No wonder that
Filipinos could not land to a job despite the thick pages of the newspaper’s
classified ads section, for only few can be qualified to have an effective
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communication skills in both speaking and writing. Such scenario, is an eye
opener that indeed, writing skills play a major role in finding a better job in the
future.
learners of any foreign language may face because writing requires fluent
grammar structure which is too different from one’s mother tongue. Also,
learners feel that writing is boring. With this, teachers must find ways on how to
address the writing difficulties of the learners in such a way that learners will be
motivated and can relate well to the given instructions. It is then crucial to
Moreover, Goode (2000) said that people learn when they have a need that
is meaningful and real. For many students, what is real is their career goals,
learning, and more positive learning outcomes (Simpson & Nist, 2002). A
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meaningful material is indeed beneficial to ensure a significant progress in
The above concepts are the reasons why the researcher embarked to study
to find out the writing proficiency level of Grade 11 students under HUMSS
strand in the academic track in terms of the structure, grammar and mechanics
developed writing aspect/s of the students. Also, the researcher would like to
assess the quality of the developed module in improving the writing skills of the
Such module, would be directly related to the learners’ real -life experiences,
future career and would make learning more fun, inspiring and relevant to their
everyday lives.
This part presents the related concepts, theories, observations, and studies to support
Writing
Harmer (2007) stated that writing is considered as a productive skill along with
speaking. When students deal with language production, it means that they should
According to Richards and Renandya (2002) among the four language skills,
“writing” is the most difficult skill for second or foreign learners to master. It is because
thoughts into words (Brown, 2001). Since the idea or thought is an abstract thing which
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comes from our mind, it is not easy to transform it into understandable or readable
form. The similar definition also stated by McDonald & McDonald (2002). He points
out that writing is usefully described as a process of putting thoughts into words and
Moreover, writing can be seen as two different views. Brown (2001) and Harmer
(2007) stated that they are the product of that writing and the process of writing. When
writing is seen as the product, the attention is placed on the final product of writing
such as the essay, the report, the story or what the product should look like. It means
that the writing should have these elements, meet certain standard of prescribed
English rhetorical style, reflect accurate grammar, and be organized in conformity with
what the audience would be conventional. In other words, the value of the end product
is the main thing to be focused on rather than the process of writing itself.
Brown (2001) explained that when writing is seen as a process, it focuses on the
various stages that any process of writing goes through, such as putting ideas down
on paper to transform thoughts into words. It means that the process of writing is more
valuable than the end of the product. Since writing is a way to communicate with others
in the written form, everything should be clear. Unlike speaking that the message of
body languages or facial expressions, in writing the message is conveyed through the
written form. Therefore, the writer should be able to make his or her reader understand
complex process. It requires the ability to write grammatically correct sentences and
organize them logically into paragraphs or essays. McCarthy (2000) and Harmer
(2007) point out that there are two important aspects in writing. In order to make writing
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to be successful, it has to be both coherent and cohesive. Coherent is the feeling that
the elements of texts are bound together in which the reader can follow the sequence
of ideas or points. While cohesive is the surface links between the clauses and
sentences of a text. It is a more technical matter since it deals with the various linguistic
ways of connecting ideas across phrases and sentences, such as using pronoun and
connector.
grammar. It relays information in such a way that the reader can understand, logically
organizes the information, takes into consideration the format and style of writing
based on the who it is intended for and accurately outlines the information.
receiver, and let the receiver understands it as well as responds to it. For example, if
a supervisor needs to get a profit-and-loss statement to her manager, she may print it
out, email it or fax it with the required information in writing. If the purpose of the written
communication is not achieved, the needed information may not be understood, which
can cause the manager to appear to her superior as being unorganized or unable to
Writing Competence
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can inform others, carry out transactions, persuade, infuriate, and tell what one feels.
language is not simply a matter of writing things down. It is one of the four basic skills
that are very complex and difficult to be learnt. Folse, Solomon, Clabeaux (2010)
describes the elements of good paragraph: (1) unity which begins with the topic
sentence. Every paragraph has one single, controlling idea that is expressed in its
topic sentence, which is typically the first sentence of the paragraph. A paragraph is
unified around this main idea, with the supporting sentences providing detail and
discussion. In order to write a good topic sentence, think about the theme and all the
points that one wants to make. Decide which point drives the rest, and then write it as
the topic sentence; (2) order that refers to the way one organizes the supporting
a well-ordered paragraph, the reader follows along easily, aided by the pattern one
has established. Order helps the reader grasp your meaning and avoid confusion; (3)
coherence which is the quality that makes one’s writing understandable. Sentences
within a paragraph need to connect to each other and work together as a whole. One
of the best ways to achieve coherency is to use transition words. These words create
bridges from one sentence to the next. You can use transition words that show order
addition, in fact). Also, in writing a paragraph, using a consistent verb tense and point
of view are important ingredients for coherency; and (4) completeness that means a
paragraph is well-developed. If all sentences clearly and sufficiently support the main
idea, then one’s paragraph is complete. If there are not enough sentences or enough
information to prove one’s thesis, then the paragraph is incomplete. Usually three
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supporting sentences, in addition to a topic sentence and concluding sentence, are
the paragraph should summarize the main idea by reinforcing the topic sentence.
Furthermore, writing needs learning and practicing. It is not skill that people can
get without practicing and drilling. Even the psycholinguist Eric Lenneberg (2001)
walk and to talk, but swimming and writing are culturally specific learned behaviors.
Humans learn to swim if there is a body of water available and usually only if someone
teaches us. People learn to write if they are a member of a literate society and usually
only if someone teaches us. Writing is important skill in English. Now days, it is not
only seen as a skill but also as the academic requirement in literate world. Since it is
(Fahmi, 2016).
Brown (2003) points out some micro- and macro skills of writing. The micro skills
refer to producing the basic skills of writing, such as forming letters, words, or simple
sentences. The micro skills are: a) producing graphemes and orthographic patterns
producing an acceptable core of words and use appropriate word order patterns; d)
On the other hand, macro skills refer to producing a text at or beyond the
discourse level that is producing a meaningful text. The macro skills of writing are: a)
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accomplishing the communicative functions of written texts according to form and
purpose; c) conveying links and connections between events, and communicate such
context of the written text; and f) developing and using a battery of writing strategies,
writing with fluency in the first draft, using paraphrases and synonyms, soliciting peer
and instructor feedback, and using feedback for revising and editing.
Teaching writing means teaching the micro and macro skills of writing as well.
Therefore, the teacher should provide activities and materials which cover those micro
and macro skills in order to make the students come to the productive stage, producing
promotes improved learning and skills development. CTL has been defined in different
ways, based on the intent of the group championing its use. Most recently, the United
characterized CTL as a “conception of teaching and learning that helps teachers relate
subject matter content to real world situations” (Berns & Erickson, 2001, p. 2). Mazzeo
strategies designed to more seamlessly link the learning of foundational skills and
concrete applications in a specific context that is of interest to the student” (p. 4).
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While much of the research on CTL is fairly recent, student engagement in
contextual learning has deep roots. John Dewey introduced experiential learning at
the turn of the century as the most sensible and effective way to make learning
meaningful for students. In 1916, Alfred North Whitehead told the Mathematical
Association of English that “the second-handedness of the learned world is the secret
of its mediocrity”— hitting on a central feature of contextual learning: the best learning
is that which can be used. In the 1970s, functional context education entered the
education and training community and served as a pre-cursory to what is now known
as CTL. Based on lessons learned from the U.S. military’s efforts to raise the skill
levels of its soldiers (Sticht & Kern, 1970), functional context education is defined as
“an instructional strategy that integrates the reaching of literacy skills and job content
to move learners more successfully and quickly toward their education and
student’s attention by illustrating the relevance of the learning experience. CTL helps
students find and create meaning through experience, drawing from prior knowledge
in order to build upon existing knowledge. A primary principle of CTL is that knowledge
becomes the students’ own when it is learned within the framework of an authentic
context.
integrates other subject content into the learning process for the students. Learning
goals are elevated to higher order thinking skills in the process of learning to find
(Berns & Erickson, 2001, p. 5). In the traditional classroom, students often struggle to
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connect with abstractions. An authentic context helps the learner see the relevance of
diverse work and life situations and 4) authentic assessment. More broadly, Johnson
describes CTL as a “holistic system” (2002, p. 24) with several components working
learning derives from the whole and not from a discreet part. She argues that together,
these components create a network by which students are better able to create
critical and creative thinking, 4) nurturing the individual, 5) reaching high standards
students like “Why do I need to know this?” or “When am I going to use this?” or “Will
relevance of what they’re learning, they become more interested and motivated”
(2005, p. 22-23). In turn, contextual learning has the potential to motivate and
effectively engage students who view school as boring or non-essential, or who have
struggled to make the connections between the demands of the classroom and their
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V. Innovation, Intervention, and Strategy
learned writing skill of the Grade 11 HUMSS students, which apparently was the
writing through considering their situation or nature as learners. The module consisted
four elements in developing a paragraph, which would help enhance their writing
organization. These were unity, completeness, coherence, and order. The teachers
and learners were provided with concepts to better understand the processes in
This study aimed to determine the writing proficiency level of Grade 11 HUMSS
department.
of:
a) grammar;
b) mechanics;
c) organization;
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Scope and Delimitation
This study focused only on the writing proficiency level of students in English in
Comprehensive High School were the respondents of the study. The researcher’s
validated questionnaire was used to assess learners’ writing proficiency level. Only
the least learned area of writing was addressed using the researcher’s developed
contextualized module.
A. Respondents
The respondents of the study were the 177 Grade 11 HUMSS students of
KNCHS-Senior High School Department. They came from four out of eight sections of
HUMSS strand.
B. Sampling
The researcher used a cluster sampling technique wherein only four sections out
of eight sections of Grade 11 HUMSS will be used as respondents of the study. These
four sections were randomly selected. The Grade 11 HUMSS students were the
jobs required a lot of writings to do. Also, Grade 11 was selected as a grade level, for
the researcher will still have another year to address the writing deficiencies of these
students.
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C. Research Instrument
The researcher’s validated assessment test was used to determine the writing
writing, and organization. It was a 45-item test that measured the three mentioned
skills.
This was utilized to identify the least learned aspect/s of students’ writing skills.
After the module was done, it underwent the quality assurance assessment in terms
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RANGE AND DESCRIPTION FOR THE
EVALUATION OF THE MODULE
RANGE DESCRIPTION
3.26-4.00 Very Good
2.51-3.25 Good
1.76-2.50 Poor
Adopted from: Prodigo, D. C. (2018). Grammatical Competence of Rotonda Elementary School Teachers
D. Ethical Issues
The respondents were given parent’s permit for them to be allowed to participate
in the study. Also, the results were kept confidential, for them not to be bullied if ever
they have gotten poor results. Students were oriented at the beginning, during and
ending of the study to ensure that they could not feel tension or any emotional
considering various genders, races, learning styles, religions, economic status, and
cultural backgrounds.
E. Statistical Treatment
proficiency level of the students was also provided. The module went through quality
assurance in terms of its content and technicalities using rating scale and descriptions.
The mean and percentage were used to evaluate the status of the module in terms of
The researcher asked permission first from the school’s assistant principal for
academics to conduct the study. After it was approved, the crafting of assessment test
to measure the writing proficiency level of the students was done. It was then validated
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and used to measure students’ writing skills. Then, the results were interpreted, and
the module was created to address students’ least learned writing skill.
The table displays that students have already high proficiency level in terms of
grammar and mechanics of writing, which attained 12.16 and 12.03 mean respectively.
On the other hand, students’ organization still need further enhancement, for it only
The result simply implies that Grade 11 HUMMS students must be provided with
in writing to give sense to the whole passage. Order, which is part of organization,
helps the reader grasp meaning and avoid confusion. The same with coherence still
under organization, which makes one’s writing understandable (Folse, Solomon, &
Clabeaux, 2010). Without organization, nothing can be conveyed in the article. Thus,
students’ skills in this area must be given immediate attention, for they will be doing
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Table 2. Content Evaluation of the Module
The table exhibits that the contextualized module aimed to improve learners’
organization skill has a very good content with a rating of 3.78, which means that the
concepts provided were varied, sufficient, accurate, and relevant to the needs of the
learners. The concepts were parallel to the learning goals or competencies expected
This signifies that the module could be utilized as one of the instructional
materials that could help address the organization problem of the learners.
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Table 3. Technical Qualities Evaluation of the Module
The table shows that the contextualized module has a very good technical
qualities that attained an overall mean of 3.75, which suggests that the objectives are
clear and relevant, the text is readable considering learners’ level, free from
This signifies that the module is suitable instructional materials to the kind of
respondents.
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Table 4. Instructional Qualities Evaluation of the Module
The table reveals that the contextualized module has a very good instructional
qualities with 3.78 overall mean, which means that the exercises given covered the
needed skill to be acquired, and provide varied activities that enable the learners to
This signifies that the module is a helpful material to address learners’ problem
in organization.
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IX. ACTION PLAN
II. Discuss results of Research, March Bond paper Results of the study
the study to the Assistant SHS 2019 Amount were disseminated
KNCHS-SHS faculty Principal for needed: to the teachers
Academics, 2000.00
Subject Group
Head-HUMSS,
KNCHS-SHS
English
teachers
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X. REFERENCES
Berns, R., & Erickson, P. (2001). Contextual teaching and learning: Preparing
students for the new economy. The Highlight Zone: Research @ Work, 5, 2-9.
(ERIC Document Reproduction Service No. ED452376)
Mazzeo, C., Rab, S., Alssid, J. (2003). Building bridges to college and careers:
contextualized basic skills programs at community colleges. Workforce
Strategy Center, Brooklyn: NY.
Mazzeo, C., Rab, S., & Alssid, J. (2003). Building bridges to college and careers:
Contextualized basic skills programs at community colleges. Brooklyn, NY:
Workforce Strategy Center. Retrieved from
http://www.workforcestrategy.org/images/pdfs/publications/
Contextualized_basic_ed_report.pdf
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Salazar, M. (2007). The decline of English proficiency. Retrieved from
http://www.academia.edu/7010906/Local_studies_study-shows-filipino-
college-studes-not-proficient-
_english_On_the_decline_of_English_proficiency.
Sarmiento, C. (2016). Writing is the Most Challenging Macro Skill to Learn! Retrieved
from https://markanthonypasubillo.blogspot.com/2016/08/writing-is-most
challenging-macro-skill.html
Sticht, T., & Kern, R. (1970). Project realistic: determining literacy demands of jobs.
Journal of Reading Behavior. 2(3), 191-212.
Velasco, P. (2012, March 6). A primer on the new K-12 Philippine education
curriculum. Retrieved from www.smartparenting.com.ph
Wider Opportunities for Women (2009). Strategies for family economic self-
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http://www.wowonline.org/ourprograms/fess/sfess.asp
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XI. FINANCIAL REPORT
Sheet No:
Period
Covered: AUGUST 10, 2018-March 6, 2019 Report No:
OR/RER Nature of
DATE No.
Payee Amount
Payment/particulars
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EMR-CENTER BLUGRE
3/4/19 21681 MEALS
COFFEE 375.00
EMR-CENTER BLUGRE
3/4/19 21683 MEALS
COFFEE 265.00
EMR-CENTER BLUGRE
3/4/19 21682 MEALS
COFFEE 190.00
EMR-CENTER BLUGRE
3/5/19 21687 MEALS
COFFEE 455.00
3/6/19 3411 CELEMA'S PLACE & CATERING SERVICES MEALS
1,165.00
EMR-CENTER BLUGRE
3/6/19 74185 SNACKS
COFFEE 155.00
TOTAL
20,122.10
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APPENDICES
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APPENDIX A
August 2, 2018
FERNANDO L. NEQUINTO
Asst. SHS Principal for Academics
Sir:
With this, I would like to ask permission from your good office to allow me to conduct my study
in our school from August 2018-March 2019. I will be using four sections of HUMSS strand
enrolled in our school in the School Year 2018-2019 to be the respondents of my study.
Your positive response on this undertaking would be of great help to the success of this study.
Noted:
Approved:
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APPENDIX B
Module Evaluation Form
Direction: Please encircle the number of the rating that corresponds to your choice using the
rating provided below:
Rating Description
4 Strongly Agree
3 Agree
2 Disagree
1 Strongly Disagree
INDICATORS RATING
4 3 2 1
11. Exhibit understanding of the content.
12. Learners are encouraged to perform 4 3 2 1
various drills or activities.
13. The activities will develop the
knowledge and skills of learners to 4 3 2 1
perform effectively and achieve the
desired result.
14. The resources are best suited to 4 3 2 1
accomplish the goals.
15. The module is related to learners’ track 4 3 2 1
and strand.
16. The module provides clear, accurate
4 3 2 1
and adequate discussion about the
topic being discussed.
17. Learners can apply their knowledge 4 3 2 1
effectively in the real world.
18. Integrates knowledge and 4 3 2 1
competencies across all discipline.
19. Includes knowledge and skills which
4 3 2 1
are valid-relevant and applicable to
real life situation.
20. Provides the essential knowledge that
4 3 2 1
learners need to succeed in the next
level of their life.
Signature of Evaluator:
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Module Evaluation Form
Direction: Please encircle the number of the rating that corresponds to your choice using the
rating provided below:
Rating Description
4 Strongly Agree
3 Agree
2 Disagree
1 Strongly Disagree
INDICATORS RATING
Signature of Evaluator:
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Module Evaluation Form
Direction: Please encircle the number of the rating that corresponds to your choice using the
rating provided below:
INSTRUCTIONAL QUALITIES OF MODULE
Rating Description
4 Strongly Agree
3 Agree
2 Disagree
1 Strongly Disagree
INDICATORS RATING
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