User:Lazman321/Spotchecks/Chris Redfield

For the FAC of Chris Redfield, as requested by its nominator, I will be conducting spotchecks soon. Lazman321 (talk) 20:29, 20 December 2024 (UTC)

Spot checks will be as of revision 1264098849. Lazman321 (talk) 20:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [96] - Pass
2. [90] - Pass
3. [85] - Pass
4. [75] - Pass
5. [62] - Pass
6. [68] - Pass
7. [12] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
8. [37] - Pass
9. [20] - Where in the credits does it say these two created Chris Redfield?

Designer is at 1:05, while director is at [1] Ill add the source now. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 02:05, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [44] - Pass
2. [60] - Pass
3. [54] - Recommend augmenting the source with ref 36

Done 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [52] - Is the entire quote necessary?

I think it's fine since it is only at notes section; similar to another FA article, Jill Valentine. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 22:36, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [40] - Pass
2. [72] - Pass
3. [8] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass. Third use: Pass.
4. [16] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
5. [61] - Pass
6. [13] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
7. [55] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
8. [57] - Pass
9. [94] - Pass
10. [38] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
11. [93] - While the source does point to aspects of Chris' design in Village as an example of his depth, it more focuses on his characterization, and I cannot find any mention of prior criticism of Chris' design being inconsistent in the source.

Replaced it with "Despite being criticized for being a one dimensional character". 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 23:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [7] - First use: Pass. Second use: The credits just list Reuben among the motion actors; he isn't specifically tied to Chris. Third use: Pass. Fourth use: Ditto for second use.

Removed code veronica. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 00:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [34] - First use: Neither source compares Chris' new design to his appearance in Resident Evil 6 nor do they specify that it was in response to fan backlash. Second use: I think you might've confused this with a different source, as Takeuchi is not mentioned. Third use: Pass.

Rewritten that paragraph [2]. Can you check if there are some problems with the prose? 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 00:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [53] - Does not mention release date

Removed the released date as irrelevant to the plot. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 22:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [97] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
2. [69] - Pass
3. [92] - The source doesn't mention the balance between Chris' and Jill's personalities.

Removed it 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 23:04, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [2] - "Viral series"? The source says he played Chris in the live-action trailers for Resident Evil 5.

I don't think its worth adding anyway. I ended uo removing it. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 22:51, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [66] - Pass
2. [36] - Before I review this one, it's worth noting that if two sentences are supported by the same source, you don't have to place it at the end of each sentence. First use: Pass. Second use: Pass. Third use: Pass. Fourth use: Pass. Fifth use: Pass. Sixth use: Pass. Seventh use: Pass. Eighth use: Pass. Ninth use: Pass. Tenth use: Pass. Eleventh use: Replace with ref 50. Twelfth use: Pass. Thirteenth use: Pass. Fourteenth use: Pass.

Eleventh use source has been replaced 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔)

1. [91] - Pass, at page 443
2. [98] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
3. [76] - Pass
4. [67] - Pass
5. [28] - Recommend moving ref 27 to the clause prior

Done 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 22:51, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [15] - First use: Pass. Second use: Pass.
2. [26] - Pass
3. [51] - Neither this source nor ref 50 say the game takes place in Europe. Ref 50 instead refers to Chris being in Edonia. I recommend replacing "Europe" with "Edonia" and perhaps explaining that it is a fictional country in eastern Europe using this source.

I only replaced it into "Edonia" since Collider for video game character articles are kinda low quality for me to use it. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 22:58, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

1. [21] - Pass.
2. [73] - Pass.
3. [47] - Pass.
4. [94] - Pass.