Talk:BDSM

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Not clear English

"BDSM is thought about as a safe thing to do if it does some things. "
Comment: The English is not clear. How should that be changed? 89.8.85.11 (talk) 18:56, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have rewritten the passage, hopefully it is easier to understand now.--Eptalon (talk) 21:38, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]