User contributions for Paulburnett

27 May 2021

• 15:1915:19, 27 May 2021 diff hist +4 m Juan Venado Island Natural Reserve Changed clumsy "The reserve is home to a long row of different species" to "The reserve is home to a wide variety of different species". ~~~~~

20 May 2021

• 01:4401:44, 20 May 2021 diff hist +230 Talk:Oocyte →"Nest" single sentence ending seems wrong: new section

10 May 2020

• 03:1503:15, 10 May 2020 diff hist +1 m Marco Polo Bridge incident Added missing comma ~~~~~

4 May 2020

• 03:0803:08, 4 May 2020 diff hist −1 m 1900–1904 San Francisco plague Some vandal changed "fire" to "fart" in the last day or so! Changed it back.
• 03:0403:04, 4 May 2020 diff hist 0 m 1900–1904 San Francisco plague Changed end date of 2020 back to 1904 - somebody just changed it from 1904 to 2020 within the last day or so!

26 July 2019

• 23:2823:28, 26 July 2019 diff hist −1 m Nago–Torbole Changed incorrect "villages clings" to "villages cling" ~~~~~

9 September 2018

• 17:2517:25, 9 September 2018 diff hist +518 Talk:Lake Nyos disaster →There is a great difference between "gases that included hydrogen and sulfur" and the gas Hydrogen Sulfide: new section

28 May 2018

• 15:3215:32, 28 May 2018 diff hist +206 Talk:Badger Army Ammunition Plant →Need an update since 2014: new section

23 March 2018

• 16:3416:34, 23 March 2018 diff hist −10 m Musket ~~~~~cleaning up grammar, removed "and it was" which was clumsy.

14 November 2017

• 17:1917:19, 14 November 2017 diff hist +4 m Susan Stanton Deleted occupation - no longer Lake Worth City Manager ~~~~~

15 October 2017

• 14:1814:18, 15 October 2017 diff hist +33 Susan Stanton Changed employment information at Santa Clara Valley Water District, where she was terminated October 6, 2017. ~~~~~

24 September 2017

• 23:3523:35, 24 September 2017 diff hist +4 Kingsman: The Secret Service →Plot: added missing "the" ~~~~~

22 September 2017

• 15:1715:17, 22 September 2017 diff hist +4 m Victoria & Abdul →Production: added missing "the". ~~~~~

22 August 2017

• 02:0302:03, 22 August 2017 diff hist −4 m Susan Stanton →Personal impacts on Stanton and family: past event - changed "has" to "had" ~~~~~
• 02:0202:02, 22 August 2017 diff hist −10 m Susan Stanton →Decision to pursue sex reassignment: past event - changed "has been undergoing" to "underwent" ~~~~~
• 01:5901:59, 22 August 2017 diff hist 0 Susan Stanton →Greenfield, California: past event - changed "has
• 01:5801:58, 22 August 2017 diff hist −4 m Susan Stanton →Largo, Florida: past events - changed "has" to "had" ~~~~~

1 July 2017

• 19:1419:14, 1 July 2017 diff hist 0 m Lake Tahoe →Government and politics: Changed incorrect capital "T" inside sentence. ~~~~~

13 June 2017

• 14:5514:55, 13 June 2017 diff hist +296 Talk:Marie Callender's →Two Marie Callender's Restaurants in Northern California Closed, June 2017: new section

23 April 2017

• 13:2613:26, 23 April 2017 diff hist −5 m Poor People's Campaign →Activity: removed "over", as there is no number. ~~~~~

8 April 2017

• 20:4420:44, 8 April 2017 diff hist −22 m Pacheco Reservoir Deleted "in San Benito County" - next sentence correctly states lake is in Santa Clara County ~~~~~

25 March 2017

• 14:5614:56, 25 March 2017 diff hist −4 m Susan Stanton →Lake Worth, Florida: changed past event "is offering" to "offered" ~~~~~
• 14:5414:54, 25 March 2017 diff hist +10 Susan Stanton added how long at Greenfield // changed past event "was appealing" to "appealed" ~~~~~
• 14:5114:51, 25 March 2017 diff hist +2 m Susan Stanton →Largo, Florida: changed past event "is" to "was" ~~~~~

18 March 2017

• 01:2301:23, 18 March 2017 diff hist +2 m Susan Stanton →Support in the local community: Changed "support" to "supported" ~~~~~
• 01:1801:18, 18 March 2017 diff hist +2 m Susan Stanton →Reaction from national LGBT community: changed tense: "is" to "was", "will" to "would" ~~~~~
• 01:1401:14, 18 March 2017 diff hist −2 m Susan Stanton →National media interest: changed incorrect "transitioned" to "transition" ~~~~~
• 00:4900:49, 18 March 2017 diff hist +132 Susan Stanton Updating employment status ~~~~~

13 March 2017

• 16:5016:50, 13 March 2017 diff hist −5 m Plumber →Plumbing activities: changed incorrect "build" to "building" ~~~~~
• 16:4816:48, 13 March 2017 diff hist +4 m Plumber Added reference brackets to "plumbum" to explain the connection ~~~~~

8 February 2017

• 15:2115:21, 8 February 2017 diff hist +61 Coyote Lake (Santa Clara County, California) Added capacity of reservoir when full (similar in format to "Anderson Reservoir") ~~~~

1 February 2017

• 18:1818:18, 1 February 2017 diff hist +1 m Melica serrana →Description: changed "it" to "its" ~~~~

21 December 2016

• 15:3315:33, 21 December 2016 diff hist +209 Talk:Dillon Beach, California →"Plated" or "platted"?: new section

2 November 2016

• 14:5314:53, 2 November 2016 diff hist −1 m Myelitis added missing "the" // added missing "s" // deleted extraneous "of" // deleted extraneous "a" // ~~~~~

30 October 2016

• 20:5220:52, 30 October 2016 diff hist +4 m Destination Moon (film) →Plot: added missing "the" ~~~~~

15 August 2016

• 15:5515:55, 15 August 2016 diff hist +1 m Indian Head Naval Surface Warfare Center changed "maintain" to proper "maintains" ~~~~~

11 June 2016

• 17:1417:14, 11 June 2016 diff hist +4 m Lovers and Friends →Lovers and Friends: added reference brackets to Rod Arrants ~~~~~
• 17:1017:10, 11 June 2016 diff hist +1 m Rod Arrants Changed "He is married to actress Patricia Estrin..." to "He was married..." - they divorced many years ago; his current wife is Judith. ~~~~~

18 May 2016

• 21:4521:45, 18 May 2016 diff hist +9 m Burnet County, Texas →History: "become" > "became" / "lose" > "lost" // "offers" > "offered" / other minor cleanup... ~~~~~

27 April 2016

• 20:3220:32, 27 April 2016 diff hist +1 m Alexey Kondrashov →Professional activity: added missing space, changing "Kondrahovet. al." to "Kondrahov et. al." ~~~~~

14 March 2016

• 01:2601:26, 14 March 2016 diff hist +1 m The Sentinel (2006 film) →Plot: corrected "provide" to "provided" ~~~~~

9 February 2016

• 18:0618:06, 9 February 2016 diff hist +6 m Uvas Reservoir Uvas Reservoir is not a County park - it is located in a county park ~~~~~
• 18:0418:04, 9 February 2016 diff hist +6 m Uvas Reservoir not largest reservoir, but fifth largest - see http://www.valleywater.org/services/reservoirs.aspx ~~~~~
• 18:0118:01, 9 February 2016 diff hist +3 m Santa Clara Valley Water District changed name of previous chair of board of directors to new (Jan. 12, 2016) chair ~~~~~
• 17:1017:10, 9 February 2016 diff hist +4 m Berryessa Creek →Calera Creek: added reference brackets to Santa Clara Valley Water District. ~~~~~

4 December 2015

• 18:5418:54, 4 December 2015 diff hist −51 m Hypolimnetic aeration →Drinking water production in water reservoir dams: re-sequenced clumsy sentence / changed "dams" to "reservoirs" (!) / changed "thermo cline" to "thermocline" / cleaning up English ~~~~~

18 November 2015

• 19:0519:05, 18 November 2015 diff hist +38 m Emergency management →Mitigation: removed extraneous "take" // added that a generator "ensures continuation of electrical service" so sentence makes more sense ~~~~~
• 18:5718:57, 18 November 2015 diff hist −4 m Mitigation removed extraneous "the" (twice) // added link brackets to "political science" ~~~~~

12 November 2015

• 21:4621:46, 12 November 2015 diff hist +1 m Talk:Safety culture →"uncertainty and ambiguity": changed typo "mor" to intended "more" ~~~~~
• 21:4521:45, 12 November 2015 diff hist −1 m Talk:Safety culture →RE proposed merger with Safety Culture: changed typo "theat" to intended "that" ~~~~~