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10:4110:41, 29 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Agile business intelligence No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

18:3218:32, 28 November 2024 diff hist +27 Agile business intelligence In "five steps to Agile BI", I added 'or' before "load (E+L) model" in "Agile infrastructure; bullet point 3". The reason was because they prefer Agile BI over standard extract, transform or load (E+L) model. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
17:4617:46, 28 November 2024 diff hist +1 Human trafficking in Eritrea In "short description", I readjusted the space in the 1st sentence twice. I added "quotation marks" to the 2nd paragraph because the 1st sentence gave way by quoting the 2nd paragraph. In "background", I readjusted the space in the 2nd paragraph. I readjusted the space in the 4th sentence and also adjusted space in sentence 3. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

18:3618:36, 27 November 2024 diff hist +6 m Gamal Hamdan I added Semi Colon (;) to the bulleted list and finally added terminal punctuation at the end of the bulleted list. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
16:1116:11, 27 November 2024 diff hist +148 User talk:Alexjos1858 →November 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
11:0311:03, 27 November 2024 diff hist +919 User talk:Alexjos1858 →November 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
05:1805:18, 27 November 2024 diff hist +1,180 User talk:Alexjos1858 →November 2024: Reply Tag: Reply

11:2811:28, 26 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Ayo Ayoola-Amale In 'Literary work', I added terminal punctuation mark to finalize the sentence in the 2nd paragraph (3rd sentence). Tag: Visual edit
10:0610:06, 26 November 2024 diff hist −5 Nick Peros In 'Early life', I removed the word 'is' that was used twice in the forth sentence to avoid tautology. In 'Solo instrumental', I adjusted the space in the third sentence. In 'Producer', I adjusted the space in the second sentence. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

21:2921:29, 25 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Liz Lerman In 'tools' subheading, I replaced 'articistc' with 'artistic' to correct misspelling. I also changed double terminal punctuation to single terminal punctuation for clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
16:4016:40, 25 November 2024 diff hist +444 User talk:Alexjos1858 →National varieties of English: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
12:2412:24, 25 November 2024 diff hist +3 CBN Ogbogbo In 'academic work (4th sentence)', I added comma after the word 'currently' to make a brief pause. In 'early life and education (1st sentence)', I readjusted the space between Lagos and Nigeria, I also added comma after the noun 'Nigeria'. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
11:1111:11, 25 November 2024 diff hist +6 Dina Mired In short description (2nd sentence), the word 'is' changes to 'was' because it denotes a past action. I added period to finalize the 1st paragraph in short description. I added period to other bulleted list where other roles held by the main subject character. In 'awards and honors', I also closed the space of the hyphen between 2017 and Golden for grammatical accuracy. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
09:3509:35, 25 November 2024 diff hist +16 m Bobrisky In Immigration service, I added a link "Lagos". Tag: Visual edit
07:0307:03, 25 November 2024 diff hist −216 m User:Alexjos1858 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
03:5403:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist +5 Elson Kambalu In the short description, 's' letter was added to 'stimulate' and 'debate' in order to present a continuous flow. Art career (2nd paragraph), I added 's' letter to 'work' to indicate multiple actions. In exhibitions, I changed 'activity' to 'activities' in the 2nd sentence because it indicates multiple actions involved. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
03:1403:14, 25 November 2024 diff hist +13 Jeffrey Omura In early and education, I added 'United States' to Okemos, Michigan to further clarify where Michigan is. In career (acting), I readjusted the link to the last sentence. In actor's equity (2nd sentence), I removed 'helped' and re-edited 'create' to 'created' and 'lead' to 'led'. In the 5th sentence of actor's equity, I added 'and' and 'ed' to 'support' to further clarify sentence. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
01:4001:40, 25 November 2024 diff hist +6 m Reynaldo Rivera In short description (2nd paragraph), 'document' turns to 'documents'. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
01:1001:10, 25 November 2024 diff hist +14 m Kofi Okyere Darko In early life and education (2nd paragraph), I removed 'has' from 'had'. In personal life, I readjusted some words for more clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
00:3200:32, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1 Bangladeshi English literature In short description, I added 's' to work, removed 'the' before English language, removed 'in' before Bangladesh diaspora, and I also added 's' to 'include' twice. In raja ram mohan roy, I reduced the space between the ellipsis and the word before raja ram mohan roy. In paragraph 5, I removed the word 'sketch' and replaced it with 'shows' for more clarity. In syed mazooral islam, 'entangle' changes to 'entangles for present continuous tense, 'prevail' changes to 'prevailed', and many more edits. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

22:2922:29, 24 November 2024 diff hist −9 Sal Lopes In photographic work (3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence), 'include' changes to 'includes' because it is in a reported form. I removed 'has' in the 4th paragraph of photographic work because of the tautology as 'had' was included. In photographic printer, I also removed 'has' from the 1st sentence in the 2nd paragraph. In photographic work, I removed the letter 'a' from the 2nd paragraph (last sentence) because the letter signifies a single action whereas we have multiple actions involved. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:5921:59, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2 Main Kuch Bhi Kar Sakti Hoon In telecast, I added the word 'ed' to 'select' in the last sentence of paragraph 1 because the tone is past tense. In paragraph 2 of the same sub theme, I changed the word 'comprised' to 'that had' to properly state the past tense. In achievements, the letter 's' was added to 'feedback' in the last sentence because it is in pluralized form. Also, the word 'begin' changed to 'began', 'addresses' changed to 'addressed' because they are all in reported formats, and that is past tense. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:2221:22, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Rodolfo Acuña In career (2nd paragraph), I added 's' letter to the word 'analyze' because it is a present continuous tense. In US Latino issues (2nd paragraph), I reduced the spacing in the 3rd sentence. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20:5920:59, 24 November 2024 diff hist +12 Financial History Review In short description (2nd paragraph), I added some words to male it a complete sentence i.e. it was and where... i also removed the comma because it was unnecessary. In history (paragraph 4), I removed the quotation marks when the word was already in parenthesis i.e. (The Past Mirror). Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20:4220:42, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Gilbert L. Rochon In biography (Education), period was attached to both 1st and 2nd point, while i readjusted the comma in the 3rd point. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
15:5515:55, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1 Jesse Mugambi I readjusted the space between the link and other words following them, and this was done in hermeneutics and missiology (Sub theme). In reconstruction theology (4th paragraph to be precise), I added period to finalize a sentence. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
11:1311:13, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1,274 Government College, Ibadan In history (first paragraph), I connected 2 sentences to make it a whole. I added more write up to further clarify the sentences. Laurel in academics, percent was added to 78 to further show clarity of words. In school houses, the colour was changed from orange to yellow. I also added links to the write up and as well created a new sub theme. Tag: Visual edit
09:2909:29, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Lisabi Grammar School In growth and develpoment (Last Paragraph), the word 'wire' is changed to 'wired' because the tone there is a past tense. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
08:5908:59, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4 m Aroj Ali Matubbar The sub theme "Satyer Sandhan" was in italics, and I changed the italic font from the sub theme. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
08:4608:46, 24 November 2024 diff hist −5 m Aoora The word 'has been' was changed to 'was' to properly register the tone as past tense. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
08:3808:38, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 Southern Rhodesia in World War I In background (Last paragraph), the word 'bound' is changed to 'bounded' to clarify the tone of the reported view. Outbreaks of war (Announcement and reception), early on 5 August is changed to 'early on 5th August'; also the word 'despatched' changed to 'dispatched'. Clamouring is changed to clamoring, organising is changed to organizing, organisation is changed to organization, organised is changed to organized, despatch to dispatch, organised to organized. I added period to point out W. H... Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
07:3907:39, 24 November 2024 diff hist +16 m Jamopyper In short description, I added the word "dancer and rapper" to Nigerian singer and songwriter. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
07:2807:28, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Ahmed Belbachir Haskouri In short description, Morocan is changed to Moroccan. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
03:2603:26, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Gamal Hamdan Major work; i added letter 's' to the word 'include' in order to make a clearer statement. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
02:0702:07, 24 November 2024 diff hist +10 m Nedu Wazobia I added NIGERIA as the country needed to describe where LAGOS is. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

23:5623:56, 23 November 2024 diff hist +4 Sarafa Tunji Ishola Short description; i removed one of the word 'by' that was written twice to avoid tautology. Public service; i replaced the word 'at a' with 'as the'. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
23:2823:28, 23 November 2024 diff hist −1 Iyah-Gbede History; i removed the sentences that were unnecessarily in italics and appropriated the wordings that are meant to be in italics. i also inter-switched words to each other i.e. with and a... In geography, I added 's' to the word 'consist' stating a present continuous tone. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
23:0223:02, 23 November 2024 diff hist −2 Mostafa Nissaboury On the first page, i removed period to make the sentence a complete one. I removed the quotation marks from the breath since we have parenthesis available. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
22:4122:41, 23 November 2024 diff hist −6 Louis Marie De Schryver I added the word "He is" to best known to further validate the whole sentence in the first description. In artistic career, i removed the asterisk signs on each subtitles since we have bullet points already explaining what we need to know. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
22:0322:03, 23 November 2024 diff hist +2 William L. Hinds in paragraph 5 of career (Industry), I added 'ed' letter to the word 'develop' to place a past tense into order. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
21:3721:37, 23 November 2024 diff hist +17 Butere In the sub theme Economy, the first paragraph needed an addition of 's' to continue present continuous tense as well as spacing needed. Also, in the 2nd paragraph of the same sub theme, i added 's' word to validate a present continuous tense as well as adding 'd' letter to place those wordings as past tense in form of cultivate and commercialize. Self help group, i removed the unnecessary period added and it was changed to a comma. I worked on the fonts of the sub themes, and many more. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20:4420:44, 23 November 2024 diff hist +11 m Mona de Grenoble I changed the word "indicate to indicates" in the last 2 paragraph. I also readjusted the same sentence for proper clarity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20:3720:37, 23 November 2024 diff hist +6 Ernest Bediako Sampong I adjusted the initials of CEO where it was written as small letters for further clarification. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20:0020:00, 23 November 2024 diff hist +2 Ikechi Uko In career (sub title), there was a double quotation marks that needs to be addressed which i did. I adjusted the space in the 2nd paragraph of his career. As part of the paragraph, i adjusted the spacing and added quotation marks to properly structure the sentence. Also, the word unique turns uniquely for more clarity. In the 5th paragraph, statements were pluralized where i added 's' to (observes and developments). Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
19:0319:03, 23 November 2024 diff hist +22 Antonio C. Delgado In the sub theme "faith", tautology of words was spotted where I had to address the word "St Peter" coming twice which attracted one to be removed. Additionally, Anthonio was added to Delgado improve more clarity, and more description was added to further clarify "Holy See". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
18:1918:19, 23 November 2024 diff hist +3 Algoa Bay Yacht Club In sub theme 'Regatta", i added m (in Metres) to Sq (Square) to make it square metres as a standard SI Unit. In pragraph 11 of the same sub theme, i attached a colon for further explanation. in Sub theme 'Notable ABYC sailors, I added period to the 2nd paragraph. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
17:2417:24, 23 November 2024 diff hist −8 Samuel Kamau Macharia I readjusted paragraph 3 of the sub theme 'Early life in Education' where i removed the word "One year later and life knot" to another wordings. i did a partial restructuring of words to completely adjust the words. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
17:0417:04, 23 November 2024 diff hist +7 m Aniplex I readjusted paragraph 3 to provide consistency of words, where i added 'It was" to begin for consistency. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
16:5616:56, 23 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Isaya Mwita Charles in Political Career, i added the word 'as' to MAYOR to improve consistency of words. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
16:4516:45, 23 November 2024 diff hist +1 Latha (actress) In description, I changed the word "serials" to "series" improve fluency. I removed the letter 's' from her mother's origin since her mother isn't from 2 location. I also removed the word 'in' to admit fluency. In career and television description, i changed the word 'serials' to 'series' thrice. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

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