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Bubblegumpink Kiss (Children's Version)

Ella, a young child, really loves bubbles and pink, especially bubble gum pink. She blows a lot of bubble gum because she loves it so much. She blows large, lovely bubbles, and pink is her favorite color. She adds style and fun to every bubble she blows. In the street, the bubbles resembled pink clouds as she blew it to reach the sky. Every time she performed her style and design, the villagers would yell, "Ella's here!" with joy. She became known as the Bubble Gum Artist as a result. Her bubbles danced in the air outside the village as she became famous.

She found that she could blow bubble kisses into the gum one day. She felt like a failure when she tried and her bubble failed. Feeling sad, she said, "I can't do this." Her help came from her friends and family. "Don't worry, Ella; you can handle this. Just spend some time practicing. You'll succeed without stress if you keep trying. They gathered around and said, "Just don't be afraid." Day and night, she practiced. As her bubbles grew bigger and larger, the more Ella tried, the more she believed in herself.

She blew a bubble one fateful evening while performing at a festival to which she had been invited, and a kiss popped out. "Ella is the best, our Bubble Gum Artist!" the audience roared. Not only did this become well-known, but it also made Ella and the entire village famous. She became an example for others to follow, and Ella came to see that sharing joy and creativity with others is more important than simply blowing bubbles. In order to spread pure happiness and Bubblegumpink joy, she always performs with a pink, a colorful mix that is blown out.
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Likes: Seamus, Ruby 2446, WeaverofDreams, Stellina, Denise58, Abhi1992since
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Ruby 2446 - A delightful read with a lesson in self belief dressed in colour  fun and celebrations , really enjoyed the read

Amazing!
on Jan 21 2025 03:56 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
Titi Lope - Thank YOU
on Jan 21 2025 04:08 AM PST   x  edit  
Denise58 - I liked the message of this story.  I did not quite understand from the story what a bubblegum kiss was, but that was probably not important.  I did notice a present/past tense problem in the first sentence of the last paragraph where it said "a kiss pop out" should have been "a kiss popped out" but I did not mind.  I only mention it as something to look for when editing your story prior to posting.  It's important to some readers that the tense stay the same throughout a story.
on Jan 17 2025 11:50 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
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Titi Lope - Oh yeah thanks for the feedback I greatly appreciate it
on Jan 17 2025 12:08 PM PST   x  edit  
Abhi1992since - Awesome story, the fact of children life and the dreams they look after very true

Good work.
on Jan 17 2025 11:18 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
Titi Lope - Thank you ☺️
on Jan 17 2025 11:49 AM PST   x  edit  
WeaverofDreams - Ah, so very sweet, I forgot the hustle and bustle around me while reading this story.

Lovely!
on Jan 17 2025 02:14 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
Titi Lope - Thank YOU
on Jan 17 2025 02:40 AM PST   x  edit  
Stellina - What a lovely heart warming story Titi-beautiful for a children's book for sure! I love how you have used such a lovely children's pastime to teach the value of self belief and the courage to do what you want in life.Lovely work dear, thanks for sharing xx

Amazing
on Jan 15 2025 09:42 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
Titi Lope - Thank you Stellina
Liked: Stellina • on Jan 16 2025 01:21 AM PST   x  edit   Stellina
Seamus - Ella has quite the adventure. She learns what is truly important. Best of all she shares her gift with others and brings smiles with her. Nicely done. Good luck with the contest.
on Jan 15 2025 07:53 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
Titi Lope - thank you
on Jan 15 2025 08:15 AM PST   x  edit  
Kevin's helper - Wow, stellar work! "This poem has a clear and relatable main character, Ella, and a sweet story to tell. To take it to the next level, consider varying sentence structures and lengths to create a more dynamic rhythm. Additionally, some descriptions feel a bit repetitive (e.g., the mention of 'pink' multiple times). Try to find ways to convey the color's significance to Ella without repeating the same phrase. Overall, the message about perseverance and believing in oneself shines through, making this a heartwarming and inspiring poem."

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on Dec 26 2024 03:53 PM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit  
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