User contributions for ManuelKomnenos

10 November 2024

• 20:0620:06, 10 November 2024 diff hist +2 Sofia (1948 film) Added missing punctuation current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 November 2024

• 16:2316:23, 9 November 2024 diff hist +708 Damon Runyon →Literary style – the "Broadway" stories: Added interesting contemporary remark on Runyon's style current
• 14:4114:41, 9 November 2024 diff hist +28 Valentinian I →Campaigns in Gaul and Germania: Rewrote a paragraph for flow and added a wikilink to tribune current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:2714:27, 9 November 2024 diff hist +4 Lorenzino de' Medici →Cultural depiction: Grammar fix; italicized title of play current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:2614:26, 9 November 2024 diff hist 0 Lorenzino de' Medici →Cultural depiction: I don’t think section headings need all their words capitalized Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:2314:23, 9 November 2024 diff hist 0 Lorenzaccio →Performances, translations, and adaptions: I don’t think section headings have to be capitalized as though they were titles current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 November 2024

• 01:4601:46, 4 November 2024 diff hist −44 Undertow (1949 film) Moved mention of Hudson to the passage with other cast members, and simplified convoluted phrasing; changed plot synopsis (the character is just out of the army, not just out of prison) current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 November 2024

• 20:2920:29, 1 November 2024 diff hist +5 Robert Aldrich →Early feature films: Moved film’s name to a better place in its sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:2420:24, 1 November 2024 diff hist −11 Robert Aldrich Fixed another grammatical problem related to the use of a quote, and changed a subsequent sentence to avoid repetition Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1220:12, 1 November 2024 diff hist +10 Robert Aldrich Fixed sentence which deployed its quotation in an ungrammatical way Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 October 2024

• 19:3819:38, 31 October 2024 diff hist +41 The Light of Day (Eric Ambler novel) →Plot: Added a bit of political context current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 October 2024

• 21:1721:17, 30 October 2024 diff hist +37 Skulpturensammlung →Exhibition: Added wikilink to a sculptor current

28 October 2024

• 19:2119:21, 28 October 2024 diff hist +1 Helen Walker →1947–1955: Auto accident and career decline: Added missing period Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5918:59, 28 October 2024 diff hist −4 Jeanne Crain →Later career: Removed duplicate wikilink to Dana Andrews Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 October 2024

• 19:1519:15, 27 October 2024 diff hist +1 Ptolemy III Euergetes →Cyrenaica (246 BC): Added missing comma current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 October 2024

• 23:0323:03, 25 October 2024 diff hist −367 Crossroads (1942 film) →Plot: Further abbreviations and a typo correction current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5922:59, 25 October 2024 diff hist −576 Crossroads (1942 film) →Plot: Rewrite to tone down somewhat exuberant language Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 October 2024

• 01:5001:50, 24 October 2024 diff hist −74 Treasure of Begram Removed duplication of information given in preceding paragraph current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4701:47, 24 October 2024 diff hist +6 Glass coloring and color marking Changed wikilink— for some reason Begram Hoard redirects to Begram ivories, and not to article for the treasure as a whole Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4301:43, 24 October 2024 diff hist +2 Pressed glass Glas-> glass current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4101:41, 24 October 2024 diff hist +36 Ramazzotti (liqueur) Added wikilink to a gastronomic term current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 October 2024

• 01:3001:30, 23 October 2024 diff hist +19 Magnentius →Civil war: Removed unnecessary capitalization from two words; elsewhere, reworded a sentence to remove repetitious language current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:2501:25, 23 October 2024 diff hist +17 Magnentius →Demise: Fixed italics mistake and set wikilink to go to more specific page Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 October 2024

• 11:5811:58, 22 October 2024 diff hist 0 Monty Python's The Life of Brian / Monty Python Scrapbook →Contents of scrapbook: Apparently “the” is not part of the paper’s name current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:5211:52, 22 October 2024 diff hist +1 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents →Incident regarding User:CooperSnyder787878: Added a = whose absence seemed to be messing with formatting Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:3304:33, 22 October 2024 diff hist +9 Commonplace book →Philosophical origins: Better phrasing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:4103:41, 22 October 2024 diff hist −2 Bartleby (1970 film) →Critical reception: More direct sentence construction; italicized title current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:3900:39, 22 October 2024 diff hist +29 Cause for Alarm (novel) →Plot summary: Rearranged first paragraph for flow, and added historical context current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:2500:25, 22 October 2024 diff hist +16 Monty Python's The Life of Brian / Monty Python Scrapbook →Contents of scrapbook: Added wikilinks to two people and a newspaper mentioned in titles Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 October 2024

• 19:2219:22, 21 October 2024 diff hist −4 Commonplace book →Philosophical origins: Rearranged and otherwise adjusted a long, complex sentence; elsewhere, added a comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 October 2024

• 22:4222:42, 19 October 2024 diff hist −177 Teach Yourself Heath Condensed a paragraph which had contained redundant material current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:0418:04, 19 October 2024 diff hist +4 Andrew Keir →Selected filmography: Added wikilink to historical character Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:0018:00, 19 October 2024 diff hist −8 Quatermass 2 →Writing: Rearranged a sentence for flow current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:3601:36, 19 October 2024 diff hist −27 Money in the Bank (novel) →Plot summary: A few wording changes current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:2701:27, 19 October 2024 diff hist +33 Battle of Byzantium →Background: Satrap and Satrapy went to the same article, so I replaced the generic wikilink to satrapy with one to the specific satrapy of Lydia; restructured a sentence to accommodate this change current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:1901:19, 19 October 2024 diff hist −27 Battle of Byzantium →Battles: Further linguistic condensation; standardized spelling of Antigonus Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:1201:12, 19 October 2024 diff hist −148 Battle of Byzantium →Background: Moderate abbreviations— as an preliminary section this should be as compact as is reasonable Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5800:58, 19 October 2024 diff hist −130 Shima (queen) More compact phrasing in legend section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 October 2024

• 06:4206:42, 18 October 2024 diff hist −1 Alice Levine →Awards and nominations: Rearranged a sentence— “most successful podcast in British history” looked like it was referring to Levine and not the podcast current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 October 2024

• 07:2607:26, 17 October 2024 diff hist −5 Nerio Bernardi →Life and career: Removed superfluous “the” current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 October 2024

• 20:5520:55, 16 October 2024 diff hist −4 Battle of Byzantium Removed a word (sentence fragments sometimes work better in infoboxes) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:5320:53, 16 October 2024 diff hist −139 Battle of Byzantium →Background: Miscellaneous cleanup (mostly removing repetitions of the phrase “Antigonus marched against [opponent]” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:4120:41, 16 October 2024 diff hist −29 Battle of Byzantium Moved date to opening sentence and added wikilink to Second War of the Diadochi Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0102:01, 16 October 2024 diff hist −14 Durrës →Middle Ages: Reworded a paragraph to remove repetitions of “the city” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:5201:52, 16 October 2024 diff hist +17 Durrës Decapitalized “ancient” and changed a wikilink (former link was a redirect and didn’t fit well into its sentence) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4301:43, 16 October 2024 diff hist +4 Durrës Rearranged a sentence to put the various founding peoples together in one clause Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:3300:33, 16 October 2024 diff hist −17 Henry II of France →Death: Removed duplicate wikilink and introduction for de Poitiers Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 October 2024

• 20:1420:14, 15 October 2024 diff hist −15 Constantine VIII →Adulthood: Simplified wording in two sentences Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:5819:58, 15 October 2024 diff hist +24 Panegyrici Latini →Language and style: Added wikilink to a technical term current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:5419:54, 15 October 2024 diff hist +36 Panegyrici Latini →Background: Added wikilinks to Trier’s ancient and modern names Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit