Punctuating Direct Speech

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Punctuating Direct Speech

Inverted Commas
Inverted Commas
Inverted commas are also known as speech marks.
They are used to show when someone is speaking.
Although it may look complicated, by following just a
few simple rules you can become an expert at punctuating
direct speech.
Rules for Punctuating Direct Speech
1. Place “ ” around the words which are spoken.
2. Use a capital letter at the start of a speech sentence (even if
it is in the middle of another sentence).
3. Before you close your inverted commas use a comma,
question mark or exclamation mark to separate what was
said from the speaker.
4. If a new person speaks, start a new line.
For example:
“Should we tell the
humans we can speak
Kevin replied,
English?” asked Stuart.
“No, definitely
not.”

The punctuation
‘No’ is capitalised placed before
because it is the start closing the
of the speech inverted commas is
sentence. a ? as Stuart asked
a question
For example:
“You’ll win then,”
murmured Emery,
“you’re much faster
“I’ll race you
than I am.”
there!” said Isla.

‘you’re’
Despite coming doesn’t need
after an ! , said is a capital letter
not capitalised. because it is
not the start
of the speech
sentence.
Punctuating Direct Speech
Can you punctuate the speech in these sentences correctly?
What time are we going out asked Zoe.

“What time are we going out?” asked Zoe.


Yasmin shouted look out

Yasmin shouted, “Look out!”


Besides said Sam thoughtfully what was she doing there
anyway
“Besides,” said Sam thoughtfully, “what was she doing
there anyway?”
Remember: Put inverted commas around what the speaker says, start each speech sentence with a capital
letter and place a piece of punctuation before closing your inverted commas.
Punctuating Direct Speech
Can you rewrite this section of text using the correct
punctuation?
 
did you eat the last doughnut Hannah asked her little brother. no I
had carrot sticks for my snack replied Zac innocently. then where
questioned Hannah did the sugar all around your mouth come from.
smiling mischievously, Zac responded I’m not sure, but it definitely
wasn’t from your doughnut
Punctuating Direct Speech
Can you rewrite this section of text using the correct
punctuation?
 
“Did you eat the last doughnut?” Hannah asked her little brother.

“No, I had carrot sticks for my snack,” replied Zac innocently.

“Then where,” questioned Hannah, “did the sugar all around your
mouth come from?”

Smiling mischievously, Zac responded, “I’m not sure, but it


definitely wasn’t from your doughnut!”
Remember: New speaker, new line.
Reporting Clause
Reporting Clause
Direct speech will almost always need a reporting
clause.
A reporting clause tells the reader who the speaker was
and how they spoke.
For example:

“I came 1st!” shouted Frank


excitedly.
This is a reporting clause – it tells you that
Frank was our speaker and he was shouting
excitedly.
Reporting Clause
A reporting clause can come before, after or split the
direct speech. For example:
Location Sentence
Dan asked hungrily, “Do you know what time lunch
Before
is?”
“Do you know what time is lunch is?” Dan asked
After
hungrily.
“Do you know,” Dan asked hungrily, “what time
Embedded
lunch is?”

Varying the location of the reporting clause keeps your


writing interesting for the reader.
Reporting Clause
Can you change the position of the reporting clause?

Location Sentence
quietly, “I think we should hid
Darcey whispered quietly, hidee
Before
upstairs.”
upstairs.
“I think we should hide upstairs,” whispered
After
Darcey quietly.
“I
“I think ,”
,” Darcey whispered quietly
think,”
think quietly,, “we
“we should
should
Embedded
upstairs.”
hide upstairs.

***CAREFUL***
You may have to add, remove or change some punctuation when you move the
reporting clause.
Synonyms for Said
Synonyms for Said
Repeatedly using the word ‘said’ after every speech
sentence is a quick way of making your writing very
boring for others to read.
Keep a thesaurus handy and refer to it when writing
dialogue to keep your writing interesting.
Quiz
Which is correct?

“Can I have lemonade to drink?” Asked Vivian.

“Can I have lemonade to drink?” asked Vivian.

“Can I have lemonade to drink,” asked Vivian.


Which is correct?

“Can I have lemonade to drink?” Asked Vivian.

“Can I have lemonade to drink?” asked Vivian.

“Can I have lemonade to drink,” asked Vivian.


Which is correct?

Flynn replied, “He said he was going to the park”.

Flynn replied, “he said he was going to the park.”

Flynn replied, “He said he was going to the park.”


Which is correct?

Flynn replied, “He said he was going to the park”.

Flynn replied, “he said he was going to the park.”

Flynn replied, “He said he was going to the park.”


Which is correct?

“I think” said mum, “that we’ll go to the zoo today”

“I think,” said mum, “That we’ll go to the zoo today.”

“I think,” said mum, “that we’ll go to the zoo today.”


Which is correct?

“I think” said mum, “that we’ll go to the zoo today”

“I think,” said mum, “That we’ll go to the zoo today.”

“I think,” said mum, “that we’ll go to the zoo today.”


Which is correct?

“I love vanilla ice cream” exclaimed Zara excitedly.

“I love vanilla ice cream!” exclaimed Zara excitedly.

“I love vanilla ice cream!” Exclaimed Zara excitedly.


Which is correct?

“I love vanilla ice cream” exclaimed Zara excitedly.

“I love vanilla ice cream!” exclaimed Zara excitedly.

“I love vanilla ice cream!” Exclaimed Zara excitedly.


Which is correct?

“I’m really sorry ,” said Oscar sadly, “but I can’t


come tomorrow.”

“I’m really sorry ,” said Oscar sadly, “But I can’t


come tomorrow.”

“I’m really sorry ” said Oscar sadly, “but I can’t


come tomorrow.”
Which is correct?

“I’m really sorry ,” said Oscar sadly, “but I can’t


come tomorrow.”

“I’m really sorry ,” said Oscar sadly, “But I can’t


come tomorrow.”

“I’m really sorry ” said Oscar sadly, “but I can’t


come tomorrow.”

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