Wafa Ibrahim S Alotaibi - Research Proposal
Wafa Ibrahim S Alotaibi - Research Proposal
Wafa Ibrahim S Alotaibi - Research Proposal
This is my research proposal for the application for a PhD programme in medical
education; the purpose of choosing this particular topic area is that assessment in medical
education is my main interest. In this proposal, I will follow the proposal protocol guideline
outlined by Swanwick (2014). The proposal will take the following order: title and aim,
research question, background literature, methods and methodology, plans for the dissertation
findings, timeline, and references. Ethical considerations must be taken into account in order
to complete the proposal; this will be done later.
The impact of a reliable and valid peer assessment tool in first-year medical students’
behaviour and academic achievement in the problem-based learning environment at Qassim
University, Saudi Arabia.
Research questions
To what extent can a newly developed peer assessment instrument with good psychometric
measures be used as an assessment and development tool at once?
To what extent can a valid and reliable instrument decrease the main drawbacks of peer
assessment, such as, low student engagement, students’ frustration at filling in a peer
assessment tool, and the need of anonymise in many situations?
To what extent can a reliable and valid developmental peer assessment change both students’
assessment behaviours and professional behaviours?
To what extent do students change their behaviour before and after receiving peer feedback
related to problem-based learning behaviour and academic performance?
Firstly, I conducted previous research during my master’s degree about students’ learning and
study strategies in the first year; the result was quite disappointing as many students had a
defect in multiple essential learning strategies. In addition, there was a high dropout rate that
was reported among first-year medical students at Qassim university, which is probably
caused by default in adapting to the university learning style with quite a low level of learning
strategy. Faculty members at Qassim Medical College assume that students who are unable to
continue through medical school are in need of special support, but this is not currently
specified. Thus, peer assessment could provide students with the proper support that they
need. Especially as the main goals of peer assessment, as mentioned by Gielen (2007), are: to
prepare students to practice self-monitoring and self-regulation strategies in lifelong learning,
to install social control into the learning process by reaching desired behaviour and avoiding
undesired behaviour, to stimulate students to actively participate by supporting their
autonomy, and the most popular goals of peer assessment, as an assessment tool, to judge
peers on their learning attitude, and as a learning tool, to adjust students’ professional
behaviour. So, by the end of this research, I hope to have outlined a plan to use peer
assessment to determine if students’ professional behaviour and academic achievement in a
problem-based setting will change after receiving peer feedback. Secondly, Qassim students
come from an entirely traditional learning background to a problem-based learning style, so it
is worthwhile assessing if they can determine assessment behaviours and professional
behaviours or not.
It is important to outline the exact meaning and definition of peer assessment and its
concepts and principles in education, which is well defined in the literature. Peer assessment is
an important factor in the design of learning environments applying a more participatory
culture of learning (Kollar and Fischer, 2010). Additional definitions by Topping (1998) and
Van den Berg (2006) state that peer assessment is considered as a process of evaluating the
quality or success of peer outcomes, which is followed by the provision of feedback. Research
into peer assessments has found that peer assessment can be described in many different
terminologies, such as, peer revision by Cho and MacArthur (2010) and peer feedback by
Strijbos (2010). To clarify the significance of and need for peer assessment in medical
education, it is well documented in research that peer assessment is fundamentally a
cooperative activity that occurs between at least two peers (Kollar and Fischer, 2010). The
literature on peer assessment could be used to improve students’ professional behaviour,
which is currently an increasingly important part of the medical school curriculum (Roberts,
2010). Thus, peer assessment is considered an important factor in developing medical
students’ professional behaviour and could lead to further educational improvement.
In the context of group work, both peer assessment and PBL focus on group collaboration.
Peer assessment offers a powerful way for students to obtain feedback on their learning
(Ballantyne, 2002). For example, weak students who obtain low scores in academic activities
can learn from colleagues who know how to learn and who obtain higher scores in the
university academic activities, including in PBL sessions. Despite the fact that PBL adopts a
deep learning approach, and encourages collaboration and active learning among students to
promote internal motivation through the provision of pragmatic goals (Kelson and
Distlehorst, 2000), the peer assessment process could support students in achieving these
goals. In addition, due to challenges in assessing students during all the learning hours of the
PBL system, peer assessment is considered an advanced method of assessing higher order
learning in these tutorials. These hours could amount to 18 of the 48 credit hours that
students must attain, which is what occurs in the Bachelor of Medicine programmes at the
University of Qassim.
The peer assessment instrument that will be used in this research will be designed to stimulate
reflection to improve students’ academic achievement in problem-based sessions, and to
improve students’ professional behaviour, with two purposes: (i) to change behaviours
according to students’ own performance, and (ii) to change behaviours according to students’
peer performance, from the student’s perspective. The instrument that will be used is derived
from Roberts and others’ (2017) study. In addition, this instrument will be modified to include
students’ academic achievements assessment by adding the academic assessment scale used by
Qassim University. The instrument developed by Roberts is a modified version of a
previously validated peer assessment instrument for use in PBL groups. The original measure
was developed by Papinczak and others (2007), using qualitative and quantitative data
collected from tutor assessments of students’ PBL performance. The original instrument
included 17 items across five areas: self-awareness, critical analysis, responsibility and respect,
information processing, and communication. Students are asked to rate the strength of their
agreement or disagreement with statements about their peers’ performance in that week of
PBL classes using a 5-point Likert-type scale (1 = totally disagree; 5 = totally agree).
Therefore, there is time for each student to express and display their communication skills and
educational leadership abilities. For each student, the mean score of the instrument is
calculated across the nine items and the ratings of students within that student's PBL group (n
In this research, I will use the quasi-experimental method of a pre-/post-test design for a
cohort of students in year one; this will take the form of giving PBL peer assessment, with the
intervention of receiving a summary of peer feedback. The sampling method will be simple
random sampling, which has a respectable range of validity and reliability. The number of
first year medical students recruited will be 120 male and female students. The Papinczak
instrument can be distributed on paper or electronically, using the blackboard university
website. So, for this research, I will prepare 120 electronic versions and distribute the link to
the students, to be completed by them after the PBL session. Thus, as the total number of
students is around 120, the results will be generalizable (Golafshani, 2003), which was
recommended in Roberts’ (2017) study.
Since there are five domains in the research instrument (self-awareness, critical analysis,
responsibility and respect, information processing, and communication) that will assess
students’ peer performance, the analysis of this data will be difficult. Data analysis in
qualitative and quantitative research is known to be very important and can be challenging.
One of the biggest advantages of using the web-based instrument tool is that the analysis will
be done easily, as the coding part will be carried out by the website. The tool will yield
statistical analyses using SPSS in schemes, such as, a statistical analysis in relation to age,
gender, and college status, item statistics for each instrument scale, individual scale statistics,
and correlation among scales. There is an additional significant analysis that could also be
carried out by the blackboard website. In relation to these statistics, I will correlate them with
the earlier students’ scores and performance results, general percentages of the student
dropout rate, and percentages of student success in academic courses.
In general, plans for the research findings will depend on the student analysis results of
Papinczak’s instrument. If a student does well in the Papinczak scores and shows evidence of
a good range of professional behaviour abilities, in relation to the students' pre- and post-
professional behaviours and academic performance, then there will be special data
interpretation of the findings . This could indicate another possible cause for the
improvement of their professional behaviours and decreases the percentage of dropouts from
medical school. In this case, further research will be recommended to assess other factors that
Proposed timeline
The timeline schedule will be based on the full-time duration of PhD study (three years). The
schedule in Table 1 illustrates each month’s duty, outlining the exact nature of the work that
will be involved. As advised by Hart (2005), one or two months each year have been kept free
in case of any unexpected circumstances.
Year Task
Month 3: continue systematic literature review + prepare the full research project checklist
Month 5: develop the research instrument with good psychometric characteristic measures
Month 6: pilot testing of the research instrument + checking the validity and reliability
Month 10: re-write the systematic literature review as a thesis literature review
Year 2 Month 1:
1) prepare the pre-test to assess the students’ level of professional behaviour and academic
achievement before the introduction of the modified peer assessment tool
2) distribute to the students (online distribution or paper distribution in case of low respondent
rate)
Month 10: pre-test group discussion interview + introduce the modified peer assessment tool to
be used for a duration of 1 month = 4 problem-based sessions at least
Month 11:
1) prepare the post-test to assess students’ professional behaviour development and academic
achievement improvements
2) distribute to the students (online distribution or paper distribution in case of low respondent
rate)
Year 3 Month 1: NVIVO analysis for the pre-test group discussion interview
Month 2: NVIVO + SPSS analysis for the modified peer assessment tool results
Month 4: post-test groups discussion interview to discuss the finding results and possible
explanations
Month 10 & 11: revision of all the work and check any missing data
In conclusion, this proposal is for a mixed methods research study and its main aim is to assess
professional behaviour, improving abilities using peer assessment among first year medical
students at Qassim Medical School, in Saudi Arabia. The selection of this exact research field
was mainly due to the observed student dropout rate in some local medical schools in the first
year. The second important reason for choosing this research question is that all the students
come from traditional learning backgrounds. Thus, the result of testing their abilities to assess
their peers according to their professional learning behaviour will be valuable in determining
their needs in their first academic year. The literature suggests a variety of assessment
methods, but the data collection in this research will be performed using Papinczak’s
instrument. This instrument is preferred because it can concentrate on many important areas,
such as, self-awareness, critical analysis, and communication. Additionally, the sampling
method will be simple random sampling, which has a respectable range of validity and
reliability consideration in my research. The data will be analysed using SPSS and NVIVO,
to analyse the numerical data retrieved using Papinczak’s instrument and the group discussion
interview. The results of this study will be important to the Qassim Medical College faculty, as
they could reveal the significance of introducing peer assessment to the PBL system. Also, the
results will be important in discovering whether first year medical students are able to develop
professional behaviours in a PBL environment. It is important that this particular issue is
considered, as students they have come from a completely traditional learning environment.
Recommendations will be generated after this study has been completed, depending on the
results of students’ assessment. These results will define if the student positively developed
professional behaviours with the use of peer assessment. Consequently, recommendations will
be developed based on these considerations.
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