Jessica G Sample and Editing Notes
Jessica G Sample and Editing Notes
Jessica G Sample and Editing Notes
FX Expressions Pueblo, CO
Sales Director Oct 2005 – January 2010
Executive management attracting accounts, ensuring contractual quality, and training staff.
● Align goals with brand communication, track progress, and motivate team
● Attract new clientele; perform event operations; facility management
● Communicate interdepartmental training materials and adhere safety policies - reduced costs and raised revenue; increased profit margin 13%
within first year of role
EDUCATION
Juggernaut University Juggernaut Park, FL
Bachelor of Science, Entertainment Business
SKILLS
CRM: Monday, HubSpot, Salesforce
Design: Adobe Creative Suite (Including Photoshop, InDesign, and Illustrator); Procreate, Sketch
Administrative: Office 365 (Excel, Word, Outlook, PowerPoint); Google G Suite (Drive, Sheets, Docs, Hangouts)
Sales: Attracting New Accounts, Retention, Presentation, Product Knowledge, Marketing Design, Conversion and Reporting Analysis
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Solely Awarded Leadership Recognition: Nujoy Media Leadership Award 2009
Attracted Startup Capital 25k: Business Plan written for Trainers. INC 2010
Initiated and Designed Training Program: FX Expressions 2006, raised profit overall by 13%
Most Profitable Wedding on the Books: Estes Park Resort 2016
1) Get rid of “jesse the girl” (change that Linkedin, they will check and that name doesn’t look good in corporate, nah offense girl!
2) remove all “ofs” “ands”
3) make sure Linkedin matches this resume, just copy and paste when we are done with the final. That’s really important
4) Write below the title in the same way I did. Describing what the company does and what you did.
i.e. Denver Great Minds is a full service, blah blah… same style of how I wrote just make it all jazzy and professional. Your executive
summary if you will. Just BLASTED in their face so they know exactly what that company is and why you were hired
5) besides current job roles, all verbs are past tense
6) check all formatting and bullet point sizes to make sure they match.
7) every line needs stats. Like this VERB- STAT-RESULT generalities will get thrown away instantly. Say exactly what you did, the best of the best,
every line needs numbers! (well 90% do, but 100% if you can).
i.e. developed relationships with 20+ companies in Denver to host 100+ events raising $100k+. throw out BIG NAMES where you can
every line in your resume read it like “okay, I ‘demonstrated…. Blah blah… but HOW?” make the reader jizz in their pants after reading each line.
Look at my resume for reference of great verbs to use. Basic ones like “responded” and “kept” are garbage.
Remember, past tense VERB (“positioned” “achieved” etc) then number (110% quota, 20+ venues) then result (tripling team size, increasing
monthly occupancy by a record 30%).in this role they want to see quota attainment and surpassing (110%) and retainment/onboarding of clients.
Youre an onboarding PRO, show them that SHIIIIIIITTTT! i.e. onboarded 100+ new clients to Denver great minds in under 3 months using cold
emailing, etc etc resulting in monthly service of blah blah blah
Formatting is good, already changed a few things but your gonna have to work on some awesome title/company descriptions (Stanley hotel, boast
that shit up!)
Well, at first glance this looks like you got a few hours ahead of you. Good luck and lets do this!
Bye felicia
Love ya girl