Writing Task 2 Samples
Writing Task 2 Samples
Writing Task 2 Samples
Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live
in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media
are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?
Write at least 250 words.
Model answer
Being famous should not mean that you give up all right to a private. Although a lot
depends on the reason why a person is famous, everyone should be able to enjoy a
certain amount of privacy.
I believe it is useful to draw a distinction between those who have sought a career in the
public eye and those who have not. Prominent performers in film, television and music,
for example, have clear chosen a career path that potentially leads to fame. In fact, for
many of them, becoming as widely known as possible is a key ambition. Since they
have invited the public to focus their attention on them, they should not be too surprised
to find that people are interested in gossip or scandal about their private lives. Public
attention is not something that you can turn on and off at will. Having said that, even
those who seek fame still deserve the protection of the law and the media should be
prevented from harassing them.
Other public figures, on the other hand, have not chosen to be famous. Members of
royal families are born into fame, as are the children of celebrities. Ordinary people in
the news often become well-known through no fault of their own. It is my opinion that
the media have no right to intrude into these peoples private lives. I would even go so
far as to say that I support an extension of the law to guarantee their privacy. The media
should be prevented from reporting on things that should be private matters.
As the media continue to become more and more powerful in our society, so the
question of privacy becomes more important. Everyone deserves a private although
perhaps some deserve it more than others.
(294 words)
Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the
advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Write at least 250 words.
Model answer
It is true that many parents purchase a multitude of playthings for their offspring.
Whether or not this is a good thing for the child, is a moot point. On the face of it the
advantages seem most apparent, but could there be a downside to this phenomenon of
devoted parenting as well?
Most people would consider children who have many toys to be the fortunate ones.
Interesting things to play with stimulate many positives in the young boy or girl, such as
optimum brain development, hand-eye coordination and colour recognition, apart from
the simple joy of playing. Modern toys are designed to be educational as well as fun,
and concerned parents carefully select products which might speed their child's
acquisition of numbers or the alphabet.
Is it possible that owning multiple toys could be in any way detrimental to a child? This
is an unusual question, but there are some hidden pitfalls. For one, wealthy parents
might spoil their son or daughter by showering him/her with toys, resulting in a
negative effect on the child's character. For another, a growing child's concentration
span may suffer if they are constantly surrounded by too many tempting objects, so that
they become unable to focus on any one game for a decent length of time before being
distracted. On the social side, older children may become targets of envy from
classmates, if they are perceived as having far more possessions than their peers.
Finally, the majority of toys today are made of plastic which commonly contains the
chemical BPA, proven to be dangerous for infants to suck on or ingest.
It is clear then that this situation is not as straightforward as it first appears. It would
seem that one of the many duties of parents is to make an informed choice about how
many toys they buy for their young ones.
(310 words)
There are those who say that the majority of the damages is wrought by big businesses.
By imposing restrictions on emissions and by strictly monitoring waste disposal from
factories, plants and businesses, governments would go a long way towards preventing
climate change. It is thought that governments around the world should come up with
solutions to help prevent imminent environment disaster. Proponents of this view claim
that individual action is irrelevant in the face of massive, wide-scale prevention policies
set and controlled by governments.
On the other hand, there are a growing number of people who believe that individual
action combined with governmental and business action will do a lot more to prevent
climate change than if individual citizens were not involved. In a world of six billion
people, if everyone thought about the number of water they use, how they dispose of
their rubbish, whether or not something needs to be thrown away or if they can, in fact,
re-use certain items then we would be giving the problem of climate change and its
prevention a massive boost.
Taking both points into consideration, I firmly believe that individual citizens cannot sit
back and say it is someone elses responsibility to protect the environments; we must all
play our part-individual citizens, governments and big businesses alike.
(264 words)
media so that they can form a more realistic view of society, acceptable behaviour, and
indeed themselves.
(298 words)
As the number of private cars has increased, so has the level of pollution. Overreliance
on cars at the expense of public transport has made this problem even worse, causing
many concerned citizens to look for a solution to the problem.
One potential solution to this problem is to discourage the use of private cars by raising
taxes. If the cost of petrol was increased, then many people would consider using
alternative forms of transport or even walking. Admittedly, there would be a number of
complaints from car drivers, but these would not be of much importance when balanced
against the environmental benefits.
Another solution could be to look at more specific causes of the problem. Modern cars
are fitted with cleaner burning engines and catalytic converters. Accordingly, they do
not cause as much of an environmental hazard as some older cars. In Japan, for
example, cars are heavily taxed once they have been on the road for three years or more,
encouraging people to buy new cars which pollute less. By heavily taxing older vehicles
from the road, some of the worst-polluting vehicles would be taken off the road.
However, this would not really be fair to those who cannot afford a new car with such
regularity.
An improvement in the quality and efficiency of public transport would also encourage
people to use their cars less. In London, for example, a system has been operating for
some time in which people are allocated days of the week when they can use their cars.
On days that they are not allowed to drive, public transport is taken.
Although these are potential solutions to the problem, none of them are perfect. Only by
a concerted effort by both the government and the public can this situation truly be
resolved.
(298 words)
Top athletes get the attention of young people. Most children and teenagers like to
follow professional sports. For many of them, star athletes represent heroes, and
children want to be like their heroes. This means they will want to play sports, which is
good for their health. Playing sports also teaches valuable life lessons such as
teamwork, discipline, goal setting, and the realities of dealing with success and failure.
Professional athletes demonstrate the importance of working hard to achieve a goal, or
practicing regularly to become good at something. This is a good example for children
to follow.
However, professional athletes are not always good role models. For one thing, when
young athletes reach a level of fame, it comes with media attention, large financial
benefits and social attention. This can lead children to believe that money and fame are
an important part of sports. Children might focus more on these aspects than on the fun
of the game or on the challenge of learning how to play well. Then there are those
athletes who behave badly. For example, some cheat to win their games or take drugs to
improve their performance. This kind of behaviour sends the wrong message to
children.
Athletes are people who are held at a lofty place in the society owing to their popularity
and wealth. These attributes are what makes people want to look up to them and model
various facets of their lives along those of the athletes. We can thus be led to conclude
that professional athletes can be very good role models for children, as long as they
focus on the positive aspects of playing sports.
Model answer
In the last decade, there has been considerable debate over the role of free speech in a
free society. Some object to absolute freedom of speech. Others advocate free speech,
arguing that the freedom of speech is the single most important political right of citizens
in a civilized society. Whilst I believe that there are strong arguments on both sides, I
would suggest that freedom of speech should be protected in all but extreme
circumstances.
The freedom of speech is important at all levels in a society. Yet it is most important for
the governments. A government which does not know what the people feel and think is
in a dangerous position. This is how the communist regimes of Eastern Europe were
toppled in the 1980s. The same is happening again in other regions of the world today.
The governments that muzzle free speech run a risk of pushing their people to behave
destructively or to rebel.
Furthermore, without free speech no political action is possible and no resistance to
injustice and oppression is possible. Without free speech elections would have no
meaning at all. Policies of contestants become known to the public and become
responsive to public opinion only by virtue of free speech. Between elections the freely
expressed opinions of citizens help restrain oppressive rule. Without this freedom it is
futile to expect political freedom or consequently economic freedom.
In conclusion, I believe that the importance of free speech as a basic and valuable
characteristic of a free society cannot be underestimated. It may be challenging for
society to allow differences of opinion out into the open; however, the consequences of
restricting free speech are likely to be more damaging in the longer term.
(285 words)
History has shown that women are fully capable of performing well in the military.
Historically, there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really put
their male counterparts to shame. One need only look at the classic examples of Joan of
Arc and Mulan to see how exceptionally women could perform on the battlefield. In my
observation, their determination, courage and dignity, to this day, are still being admired
by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world.
Moreover, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to
go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war. Admittedly, gender
inequality was a highly controversial issue in the twentieth century. However, now
twelve years into the new millennium, women can learn and teach, work and supervise,
vote and voted in most countries just like men. In light of this sweeping progress in
gender equality, there is no sense in denying them the right to defend their home
country when a war breaks out.
In sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information age is
unwarranted. I have been convinced that it is in the best interest of a nation if women
are also granted equal rights in this particular arena.
(254 words)
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It is true that there have been great advances in technology over the last forty years.
.................... the use of mobile phones and e-mail communication are common these
days. ...................., machines that translate from one language to another are still in their
early stages.
Model answer
Generally, people read newspapers to find out about world current affairs and they read
magazines to be entertained. Therefore, one would expect to find articles that feature the
private lives of famous people in magazines rather than newspapers. However,
nowadays, more and more newspapers include stories like these which are neither
informative nor useful.
In my opinion, this type of gossip about people's private lives should not be in
newspapers for several reasons. Firstly, for example, the fact that Princess Diana is
going out with a sportsman is not important news. Secondly, if newspapers want to
publish articles about famous people they should focus on their public events and
achievements. In other words, if there is an article about Princess Diana it should be
about her works of charity, which will increase public awareness of important problems.
In addition, journalists should make sure that they write about the facts only, not
rumours. One should be able to rely on newspapers for the actual truth.
Magazines, on the other hand, focus on social news. But I feel it is more acceptable for
them to contain some features about famous personalities. In addition to being popular
reading, these stories often benefit the stars by giving free publicity to them, thereby
helping their careers. However, I also believe that magazine stories should not mention
things that are too embarrassing or untrue just to attract people to buy the magazine.
Sensational stories, such as these, cause great unhappiness to the people concerned.
In conclusion, I think newspapers should concentrate on real news but magazines can
feature some articles on people's private lives.
(268 words)
4) If you write less than 250 words for Task 2, you will be penalized in the Task
Response criteria.
Model answer
Nobody can deny that there are certain professionals like nurses, doctors and teachers
who are essential to the fabric of society, and who should therefore be rewarded
accordingly. However, this is seldom the case. When we look at the salaries and fees
commanded by certain film stars and actresses and people who run large companies,
this does not seem fair.
First of all, not all film stars earn huge sums of money. In fact, at any one time in the
UK, for example, roughly 80 per cent of actors are out of work and on top of that the
number who are paid so-called telephone number fees is even smaller. One must also
remember that the career of many actors is very short and that therefore the money they
earn has to be spread over many years. The same applies to company bosses.
Stating a set of criteria as to how much people should be paid is not easy. The idea of
performance-related pay is very much in vogue at the moment. Rewarding people
according to qualifications has long been used as a yardstick for paying people, but it is
not a consistently good measure. Another is years of relevant experience, but there are
many cases where a younger person can perform a task better than someone with lots of
experience.
Whatever criteria are used to assess salaries, an on-going cycle will develop. This will
create pressure in other areas. This considered, generally I feel that certain key
professionals should have their salaries assessed by independent review bodies on an
on-going basis so that they do not fall behind.
(269 words)
Model answer
The so-called brain drain from poor to rich countries is now robbing poorer countries
of essential personnel like doctors, nurses, engineers, and the trend is set to continue, if
not to get worse.
Some people say this movement of people around the world is not a new phenomenon.
Migrant workers have always been attracted by the wider choice of employment and
greater opportunity in major cities in their own countries and abroad. Recently, as the
technological age has advanced and as richer countries find themselves with not enough
workers to feed their development, they have had to run to other parts of the world to
find the necessary manpower. Many richer European countries, for example, are now
trying to attract skilled IT workers from my home country India by offering higher
salaries than they could hope to earn at home. With the globalisation of the world
economy, many people feel that the process cannot be stopped.
Others, myself included, are of the opinion that measures should be taken to address the
problem, by compensating poorer countries financially for the loss of investment in the
people they have trained, like doctors and nurses. Admittedly, this may be cumbersome
to administer, but an attempt could be made to get it off the ground. Another step,
which in part has already begun to happen, is to use the forces of globalization itself.
Western countries could encourage people to stay in their own countries by direct
investment in projects like computer factories or by sending patients abroad for
treatment, as is already happening.
It is obviously difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is
probably foolish to try to stop it, but attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.
(291 words)