5400 Lesson Plan 1 Revised Portfolio Draft
5400 Lesson Plan 1 Revised Portfolio Draft
2. Students will know language and sentence starters to use when respectfully
disagreeing with someone in a discussion.
3. Students will know the difference between what good disagreements and bad
Welcome/greeting/announcements
Welcome class! As you come in, please place last nights homework in the box, pick up
your class packets and begin filling out the While You Wait sheet. Remember it wont be
graded or collected just do your best and we will go over it as soon as everyone is ready.
Walk around room to make sure students are getting settled in and completing
worksheet.then take a seat. Do some silent reading on your own until we get started.
As students are settling in, pick 2 students to demonstrate the discussion dos and donts
that we create as a class later. The students should be ones that are comfortable being in
front of the class, can follow directions well, and wont say anything inappropriate or
crazy. They could also be students who dont always volunteer but you know would do a
good job in this activity so they can contribute to the class more. Explain to them that we
will be talking about the proper ways to disagree with someone in a discussion, and they
will show the class good and bad examples of ways to do this. Tell them their
demonstration discussion will be about something simple like their favorite food so they
can start thinking about what that is and what they want to say about it. Let them know
that you will tell them when it is time for them to come up.
II.
It looks like everyone is wrapping up on the While You Wait. When your group is done, I
want you all to discuss the answers you found. See if they match up, and talk about parts
you may disagree on. If you got something that someone else didnt or think that their
answer is incorrect, try to explain why. Ill give you all about 5 minutes to do this. Walks
around room, observes student conversation. Reads lyrics aloud to students who need it.I
am now going to pass back the Figurative Language Review sheet that you all worked on
yesterday. You all did great work, and we are going to review the answers together as a
class. Take a minute to look back over the sheet. As a group, recall a part that you may
have disagreed about and why, and try to think about how you talked through that
disagreement.
Give 3-5 minutes for students to go back over their work and discuss as a group. Circulate
the room to observe what students are identifying as having disagreed about. Think of
how they explain how they worked through it can connect with the disagreement dos and
donts for later on.
A sample conversation students could be having is as follows;
Student 1: I think that one simile is the part just the thought of you can drive me
wild.
Student 2: That is definitely wrong.
Teacher: How about you both try describing why you think you are correct?
Student 1: Well, he says a thought will drive him wild and that wont actually
happen. Just because he is saying that his thoughts make him crazy doesnt mean that it
actually happens.
Student 2: No but thats wrong because its still not a simile. To be a simile it has to
use the words like or as dont you remember?
Ok great, lets bring it all back together now. Some of these may be able to be
interpreted in different ways, but here are the answers I was able to find in the lyrics.
Ok hopefully everyone was able to get through their answers for all three sections, but
Im going to project on the board the answers I found. Projects worksheet with
highlighted answers. Does anyone have any questions on these or need further
explanation? Field questions that may come up about differing answers, use class to
explain why answer may be correct or incorrect.
Student 1: Our group didnt get Id do anything for you as an example of
hyperbole. Why do you have it highlighted?
Teacher: Great question. Did any other group highlight this answer and want to
explain?
Student 2: Yeah we got it. A hyperbole is like an extreme exaggeration. By the
dude saying he would do anything for her, he probably doesnt mean he would actually do
anything. Like Im sure he wouldnt kill a puppy for her or something like that.
Great. Now that we all remember what simile, metaphor and hyperbole are and what they
look like, we are going to dig a little deeper into what we think figurative language does
and why authors may use it. If everyone could fill out the I Think sheet in your class
packet that would be great. Dont worry about what you think would be the right or wrong
answers to the questions. Put as much of your own personal opinion as possible into this
page. They dont have to be complete sentences, but make sure you write enough to
express your thoughts fully. Youll have about 8 10 minutes to do this, and just raise your
hand if you have a question. Walk around room to answer any questions that come up.
Possible questions/discussion:
Student 1: What do you mean by the second question on this worksheet? Arent they
already saying what they mean?
Teacher: Good question. With these types of figurative language, authors are using
language that reflects a meaning that they want readers to understand. It doesnt mean
that thing is actually true or really happening. For example if we look at the lyrics shine
like gold in the song Smile, we know that he isnt actually shining. But what does that
make you think when he says that?
Student 1: That he is really happy and bright.
Teacher: Exactly. The author uses something that people know about, like how gold
shines, to convey something about himself. He isnt actually saying that he is shining like
gold but it lets audiences further understand how he is feeling. Does that make more
sense?
Student 2: How are we supposed to know what the singers know in their similes and
stuff? Is there a right or wrong answer?
Teacher: Im glad you asked that question. One of my favorite parts about figurative
language is that sometimes it can be interpreted differently based on the readers
thoughts or experiences about what the figurative language is using. For example,
someone could say You are as fragrant as a rose. For people who enjoy the smell of
roses, this would be a good thing. But other people may not like how roses smell and could
think that being fragrant like one is a bad thing.
Student 2: So its kind of up to us?
Teacher: In a way, yes. It is often smart too look at the other things the author is saying in
order to figure out exactly what they meant. If that sentence came in the middle of
someones speech about how much they like someone, then it would be easy to tell that
they meant it in a good way rather than a bad way. Use the context clues from the rest of
the lyrics to try and help you reach a good understanding of what the song writers
intended you to think.
III.
Instructional steps
Student 1: Thats so wrong! Pizza is too greasy and gross, mac and cheese is way
better.
Student 2: Thats stupid!
Teacher: DO
Student 1:I dont see it exactly that way because for me, the creamy taste of mac
and cheese is irresistible.
Student 2: That is a fair point, but the variety that pizza brings and the way you
can change it up is what makes it the greatest food in my opinion.
Teacher: DONT
Student 1: I hate pizza!
Student 2:I hate mac and cheese!
Great work guys. Hopefully everyone has a really clear idea of what strategies and
sentence starters to use when we are respectfully disagreeing, and what we should try to
avoid saying.
Step 2: Discussion
We are now going to try to implement some of these strategies by having small group
discussion based on what you wrote for the I Think worksheets. Take a minute to look
back over what you wrote, then begin to discuss it within your small groups. Really try to
focus on why you think authors use figurative language, and what effect it has on text.
Also, everyone should try to use one of the Dos that we came up with in our
Disagreement Dos and Donts at least once in the discussion. Make sure this happens by
the time we wrap up. Also, by the end write down 2 new ideas about figurative language
that you did not think about before either in the sections of your I Think worksheet or on
the back of it. I will be coming around to join in on your groups, but raise your hand if a
question comes up. Does everyone understand what we are doing? Students begin their
small-group discussions. I walk from group to group and sit with them for a little to
analyze their use of the discussion skills just taught. I will also help to keep conversations
moving forward and listen to their ideas about figurative language. An example of a
possible small-group discussion would be as follows;
Student 1: I think authors use figurative language to express their feelings better than just
using normal, everyday words.
Student 2: I thought the same thing. Sometimes it can be boring to just say that a girl is
pretty so comparing her to something else like a flower makes it more special.
Student 3: I understand why you would think that, but my idea was that authors use them
to show off their creativity.
Student 1: What do you mean by that exactly?
Student 3: Well, if they wanted to stick out from other authors and have people like them
better then they need something to be different. Instead of using the same words as
everyone else they come up with different comparisons to make it more interesting.
Student 4: I dont think so because
Me: Can we think of a better way to phrase that?
Student 4: Um yeah. You make a good point, but what if all authors started using figurative
language? Then would they really stick out from each other?
Student 3: Hmm I hadnt thought about that. I still think they would as long as they are
coming up with their own creative figurative language.
Me: How do you guys think figurative language affects the text? Do you notice anything
different about your reading when you come across figurative language?
Student 2: Yeah I think I imagine things more when there is figurative language in the text.
Like I see more pictures in my mind when Im reading it.
Student 1: I see it another way. While I also see images sometimes, for me the figurative
language adds more to my understanding of the text. I think it gives me a better sense of
exactly what the author wants me to know.
Me: Can you give an example of that from the While You Wait?
Student 1: Yeah well in the song Everything he says Youre a swimming pool, on an
August day which to me makes me think that the girl he is describing is the perfect
relaxation for hm. Like, she knows how to make a bad situation better and how to help him
relax and have fun and stuff.
Me: So which do you guys think is more useful in getting across meaning, saying exact
words or using figurative language?
Student 4: Well I think it depends on what the author wants you to know. If he wants to
make sure you know one exact thing, then using the boring word-for-word language would
probably be better.
Student 3: Right, and if the author wanted to give readers a little more imagination into
what he means then he could let them figure it out through figurative language.
Student 2: Wait I picked something kind of like that as one of my examples. In the song
Grenade the first line is I would catch a grenade for ya and I thought of two different
things that it could mean. On one hand he could be saying that if she were in trouble he
would protect her if he could. But I also thought it could be that he is willing to do
something stupid like that to prove how much he loves her if she asked him to do it. So
yeah Im not really sure which one it is exactly but maybe Bruno Mars wanted listeners to
decide for themselves.
Student 1: I really like that you came up with two meanings, but for me it was the first one
that you said that I thought about when I read it. I think her asking him to just catch a
grenade for no reason would be kind of crazy and I hope he wouldnt actually consider
doing that.
Continue circling to other groups and listen to their discussions.
Step 3: Reflection
As we wrap up our class for today, lets do a quick write reflection on the group
discussions we held today. Please turn to the Before You Go sheet in your class packets
and jot down some reflections on the role you played in todays small group discussions.
Did you use any of the strategies we discussed. What strategy or phrase did you use?
What did you do well, and what do you think you can improve? After that, write about what
you think others in the class did well or should improve on, and any other comments you
have about the discussion.
IV.
Closing
For homework I would like you to create a song, poem or short story that includes at least
2 examples each of hyperbole, simile and metaphor. It can be as long or as short as you
want, and about any topic you decide. The instructions are on the Do At Home page in
your class packet for today. Be prepared to briefly present and discuss what you did when
you come in to class tomorrow. I will check them and then we will have volunteers share
with the class. Have a great day!
Name: _________________
Name: ______________________
Class Packet; Tuesday, September 22, 2015
I Think
Jot down some brief notes regarding the use of figurative language.
Why do you think authors use it?
How does it help their writing? Is it better or worse than just saying exactly what they mean? Why?
Go back to each section of the While You Waitlyrics, pick one example of each and describe what
you think the author is trying to say in that example. Why did they use those words specifically?
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Do At Home
Create your own short story, poem or song that includes 2 examples
each of simile, metaphor and hyperbole. It can be as long or short as
you want it to be as long as you include those elements. Be prepared
to share with your small groups in class tomorrow.