Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-24
review-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-24-genart-lc-romascanu-2024-01-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-02-01
Requested 2024-01-18
Authors Young Lee , Kwang-koog Lee , Haomian Zheng , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios , Daniele Ceccarelli
I-D last updated 2024-01-31
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -25 by Antoine Fressancourt (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -24 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -24 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -07 by Robert Wilton (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -15 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -19 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -19 by Nicolai Leymann (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 24 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-01-31
review-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-24-genart-lc-romascanu-2024-01-31-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-24
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2024-01-31
IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document provides a YANG Layer 1 Connectivity Service Model (L1CSM) that
can be utilized by a customer network controller to initiate a connectivity
service request as well as to retrieve service states for a Layer 1 network
controller communicating with its customer network controller.

This document is READY from a Gen-ART point of view.

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