Update 2014-02-24-finer-grained-scopes-for-ssh-keys.md

pengwynn · pengwynn · commit d8c02762db07 · 2014-02-24T14:56:01.000-08:00
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Today we're announcing some important changes to the way that API consumers mana
 
 ## Finer-grained OAuth scopes
 
-In our quest to better enable OAuth applications to only request the permissions that they need, the API now supports three new [scopes][] for working with a user's public SSH keys.
+To meet our goal of allowing third party applications to request only permissions that they need, the API now supports three new [scopes][] for working with a user's public SSH keys.
 
 - `read:public_key` provides read access to the user's SSH keys
 - `write:public_key` allows an app to read existing keys and create new ones
